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person Fabulous
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mimi-chan, you little whore! LOL! i had no idea you could write like this, damn... you sure do put the hotness in this pairing! But I would mind the little continuity bloops I found here and there, for the rest it's great! Excellence upon excellence!

Write on!
person Tamika
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My prayers have been answered! OMG and how! You're trying to kill us with hotness or what?
Hmmm... I have this feeling like Roxas isn't as innocent as he tries to come over... but then again it could just be Riku acting jealous, there are always two sides to a story, huh?
Keep the chapters coming!

-Tamika
person Melody
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You just wrote that and your trying to tell us Riku isn't crazy?

Okay well... If he's not he needs to see a therapist... He's twisting everything around and putting the blame on Roxas

*wishes she could slap Riku upside the head*

Sora-chan shouldn't keep going back...

But you know what... I think all three of them need therapy... *goes to contemplate this some more*

~Melody "Mimi"
person Tamika
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Riku and Roxas... Oh wow... *drools* Please, please you have to make a threesome in this story with riku/sora/roxas!
This is awesome so far!
Update soon!
person Pepper
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good to have you back! Oh i'm sorry I haven't reviewed any of your stories, but I love 'em! I love 'em all! I think you're an amazing writer and I hope you make more!

Write on!

Peps
person Midnights Heart (not logged on)
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to be the best author on this site, I swear to it. I have been reading this story from the bginning, all the way back to "Welcome To The Wonderful World Of Puberty" and I love every single chapter. I do have to admit thatchapter 11 of "Aches Of The Heart" confused me in what happened to Sora. Did he get shot or not? *sigh* confusion. But it seems to be getting better in this chapter, things are coming together slowly, so hopefull i'll get the gist of everything. Continue writing, you're wonderful at it!
person Fallen to the Slashy Side
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was browsing through my favorites late one stormy night when what did I spy but a new story from the incomparable...YOU! And it's a nice one, I must say.

I'm gonna go slip into a coma over the wonderful thought of Riku and Roxas now...
person MyStic fAte (not logged in)
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well well, this is already starting out with a bang ^^. Though I am a little bit confused as how Riku suddenly did a 360 like this, I mean is he really that sex crazed? Bad bad Riku! And I thought Roxas was the innocent friend in all this but he backstabbed Sora by sleeping with Riku when he knew they were together...so I guess Sora is the only innocent one. *Hugs Sora* Please continue on, its awesome! But just so ya know, Im a Riku/Sora fan ^_~ whoo!
person faye S.
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! OH MY FREAKIN' GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY????!!!!!!!!! OMG, WHY IS RIKU CRAZY!!!!!!! HE'S ACTING LIKE HIS BROTHER!!!!!!!!!! OMG, I DON'T KNOW HOW HE'S GONNA GET THROUGH THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOONN!!!!!!!!!!:(
person Chelsea
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn... what the hell just happened? Can't wait for an update. Nor can I wait to see when Riku turned into such a sick fuck. Is there some threeway love interest in the future? Hmmmm.... .... ...