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person Anon
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please continue, i really love this saga~ :)
person Anonamys
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok just so you know!! this is really good and i can't wait till u update but i was kinda upset when you put roxas and sora 2gether... sowwy but i'm so happy u put roxy wiht axy!!!! *squeels!!!! your the best i luv all your stories<3 so sad and heartwarming and your sex scenes are so loooong but it kinda shows the emotions between the 2 ppl... so ya!! your really good at writing stories^-^
person FayeV
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update BDP! I'm finally starting to get a little unconfused! lol They had better leave my baby alone! Let Sora be!!! Jerks...and Sephiroth's a crazy asshole...LOL That was so funny when Roxas was like, "You know Riku hates my guts right?" and Axel's like "I did try to rape Sora once ya know." LOL He's like, it's like he hates both of us so it's cool. LOL And OMG!!! I almost CRIED when accidentally set the table for 2!! :( And he broke the glass!!! That was SO SAD!!! Anywayz, nice as usual!! Update soon!!! :D
person Kanda
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you keep writing this story. It's amazing. That's not even the word...!

This chapter was sad, but promising. Can't wait for the next chap!
person Sa-Chan
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read all installations of the Aches of the heart stories and I absolutely love them. You are defenitly one of the most talented writers out there! The way you portray Sora and Riku are both wonderful and heartbreaking at the same time. Now I only hope that they find Sora soon and that he doesn't have to suffer so much, he and Riku has been through so much already. I can't wait to find out what happens next....

Please update soon and remember that I am in awe of your talent. Thank you for coming up with these amazing stories that brighten my days!!!
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating:) I love this story and I really want to find out what happens! this chapter was good but I feel so bad for Sora! I eagerly await your next update, please keep Riku and Sora together!
person Destati
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I know this is what authors do after they publish a new chapter to a story; they check their reviews. Well, I'm here now to tell you that I am EXTREMELY PISSED! It took forever, three days, 22 hours and 48 minutes for you to update. That, my verbally artistic friend is not acceptable. I repeat: IT IS NOT ACCEPTABLE. Please be more prompt in your delivery as I have had numerous heart attacks night, after night when I find that there has been no update.


Lol. jk. You're a fantastic writer, as I'm sure you've been told before. But, part of what I said was the truth. Everytime I come online to ready fanfic, which is about once or twice a week, I've ALWATys checked for your story updates first. I was sooooooo excited when I saw this name pop up close to the top of the page. A smile, most literally, instantly appeared on my face. Keep doing what you're doing because you do it well. Looking forward to your next update.
person Kanda
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just today I wrote "update soon" at FF so when I saw the update I sort of hyperventilated XD Great chapter as always. Lovely AkuRoku goodness, btw. I'm happy they sort of got back together. But what really is concerning me it's the whole Sora kidnapping issue. I don't know if he's even going to make it and it worries me like crazy. Riku, do something! Give up the company, I don't know!

I'll be waiting for an update :)
person Sa-Chan
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So good so Good So GOOOOD!!! I love this story and I worship at your feet for writing it. Thank you very much please update soon...
person Kanda
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. I need to know what's going to happen! I can't tear my eyes away from this masterpiece. I've been following it since who knows when. Please, update soon!