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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm really enjoying where this one is going. Good use of artistic liberties.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a good start for a story and i have tosay sheenaXlloyd are my favorite couple of the game they make the cutest couple so update soon cause i really want to know what happens next
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for answering my challenge and also this one great start and also i really like the daydream sheena was having and i really got to say this is like i imagined but a little different. well i hope you update soon and again thank you forr answering my fic.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
alright my nigga this is agood story cause you putting my homeboy lloyd with the hot babe sheena cause them is like my favorite couple and man i just apreciate that you put in this fic my nigga and also my nigga this one banging start off kepp it up or else ill come to your house and shoot you.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
also i used the word nigga in a good way to you so update soon my nigga
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice for the begining and also for the cliffhanger. I am really glad you decided to post another LLoyd and Sheena fic this is good but the only disspointment was that it had not alot of sex scenes or the fact that Lloyd didn't really speak or think much in this chapter but it is still a very good begining. Also thanks again for posting this new Lloyd and Sheena fic also please update as soon as possible. Thanks Again.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh-Oh, Thought Sheena was suddenly going to faint on seeing Lloyd. Definately a good start on this story. Please update, because I like LloydxSheena as my favorite TOS pairing.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start, it was funny with Sheena going into a sexual coma and all. Please hurry with the next partof the story, can't wait.