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for Beautiful Goodbye

by Hitoshirezu69

schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... amazing that sex can change that much... it was good... you're an awesome writer! Keep it up okay?

It sucks that Axel and Roxas ended up so tore...sad... T.T


Wahh~
person Raye
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...That was the first fanfic of that kind i ever read and that was...beautiful and yet depressingly sad. Sad as it was, I like the idea of how they were smiling as they died, happy to be there for each other.
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story ^^ I liked it. I think you should continue and make a story about their lives as Nobodies. I have a question though. Exactly how did Soar die? That part just wasn't clear to me Oo
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw man. You got the right amount of humor, fluff and angst. It's so light-hearted and sweet that even without the ending, I'd love it. But that ending was just... wow. Very moving. It's so sad and yet, I'm glad for Soar and Lea, that they can be together again. It's one of those times where I'm crying and smiling at the same time.
Bravo, I love it.
person senku
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I DONT GET HOW exactely soar did but it was a good fic it would be nice to start anothe rchapter
person puppy kat
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Good Storie I Really like it alot. Great Job. :) :D
person Nate-Kun
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, a brilliant story...
Youi is not my style, but I'd give this story two thumbs up.
The feelongs and emotions seemed so real...
The love the fear the reality of it was quite nicly writen.
It was Well done!
Thanks for telling me about it!