rate_review Reviews

I LOVE THIS.

Though I never really saw Luke as the dominant/seme type. I always expected Asch to ravish him into the floor, wall, bed, or whatever.

I would definitely enjoy reading sweet revenge. ^o^

Oh ho ho. This was brilliant! Very well written and put together. Luke seme was sublime ^______^ Interesting place setting for sex I must say :P Rawk on!

wow...luke taking charge. hehe. well, anyone staring at asch's ass for awhile would have to jump him. *fangirl glee* you kept these two in good character. i'd like to see more from you. especially since i hope the ToA section will grow faster. *scowls*

Zipper from hell . . . hahahha . . . I like this fic; before, I always thought that Luke would be kinda . . . afraid of Asch, but this puts everything in a whole new light. And in a good way. Hahahha; the fucking Luke into the ground thing should come first. XPP

Good job!

Ha! I was looking up on ff.net, and all I found were straight fanfiction for Abyss >_> (not that I really minded or anything). So I was like: "Hey, maybe I should try AFF..." And voila! Abyss has a section, AND there's s-ai (ish so waiting for some Regret/Tear...or I'll have to write it...)

=D Kurai likes this story, Kurai likes. It was nice and kinky--only Luke would ever think of having sex...in such a confined space. ASK is also surprised that Asch was the uke! (Seeing how most of the fan art I find, Asch is seme). Well, I should shut-up my rant, because it's...not a review anymore after that. O___o

Kurai says good job! We need more s-ai (or at least Tear/Luke) fanfictions! 5/5! -kisses, waves and runs away-

make more i loved it hot hot hot i love asch and luke!!!!!!!!!!!