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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. You could certainly get a proof-reader (lots of missing words, etc.) but you wrote sussinctly. You could have had Christie stretch it out, though. Most women love to play men's minds and she could have screwed around more with the "fragile" Elliot.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At first I thought you were some one else, but after looking though FFNet for your profile I think you're the same author who wrote this fic.
Does my screen name jog a memory?
Does my screen name jog a memory?
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was kinda mild. I would've expected them to get naked. I would've liked a mental image of Christie's cans.