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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't really know what to say, but please write the next part soon. I really want to continue reading.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
Well written! Interesting!
I want to know more, please keep writing!
[exclamation points are meant to inspire you]
Well written! Interesting!
I want to know more, please keep writing!
[exclamation points are meant to inspire you]
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, quite a promising beginning. Very "13th Warrior" with the whole language thing; I think its a great idea, a feat of observation and intellect. Your description of the battle with the satyrs was well crafted and entertaining. I do look forward to reading your next installment! (Add more trolls; my favorites; and you win!)
Please keep on writing!
Please keep on writing!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I loved your battle scenes. The pulling out of the rib and using it to stab the enemy that it was pulled from... what a great touch! :D Loved it! Keep up the good work. I would love to read more of this story. :D
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...This is very intersting.
Update.
Update.