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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting piece of work, you described the fight scenes quite nicely. I'm not entirely familiar with WoW, more of an EQ2 girl personally, but this fic seems to have very promising qualities to it and I shall keep a close eye on it.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well done and great structure. Easy to read, good continuation of the plot.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff! To be honest I thought your fights in the previous chapter was a little too long, but I gotta say I still like this story more and more by each chapter.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, for me the chapter is kinda short, but you did a good job.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, can't wait for an update :)
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I really enjoy the fight. I want more, damn it. MORE!
Oh, I don't know you like this, but I'm agreed with Nova, each charater should have their own paragraph. So don't get this in a wrong way, I really enjoy your story, and hoping you update soon.
Oh, I don't know you like this, but I'm agreed with Nova, each charater should have their own paragraph. So don't get this in a wrong way, I really enjoy your story, and hoping you update soon.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it wasn' much, you just have different people speaking in the same paragraph when each person should have their own. Another good chapter and you described the fight really well, I hate writing battles, they drive me insane.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Everything looked and sounded interesting except for the last paragraph, that needed to be divided up. Otherwise, interest has been aroused and i would like to read more.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great scaffolding for a great story!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good, please continue!
I laughed when The undead told him his grammar sucks.
I laughed when The undead told him his grammar sucks.