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for Shadows Within

by BrightShadow

person vivarose
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh so much love going around. So much so much. I am slightly amazed though, last chapter no one died, however it wouldn't be a WoW story with constant epic battles now would it? :)

I am loving the way the story is progressing, you let out little tidbits and cookies here and there....Mmmm cookies.
person vivarose
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay this is hte month that everyone is updating! We should all have a update party XD
person Ymir
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seems like you've finally picked up the wonder of cliffhangers. :D
As I've come to expect from you, great content - also, glad that you cut down a little on the fights and focusing more on the story, makes it alot more worthwhile.

Keep up the great work, and make the next chapter quickly!
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. ^_^ Can't wait for the next. Keep up the great work.
person M.R.B.
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah man.....I don't know how long I've been away from the computer, but at least I'm here, right?

Great chapters by the way, looking forward for the next update.

And I will read your other story right now.
person vivarose
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh. One word for this chapter: HOT! And of course kinda kinky with all the little voyeuristic spirits joining the party. ^_~ Yay for multiple personality disorder and generalized creepyness taking over the smexy Rogue! Now I shall prescribe some Lithium for the dear boy :-D
person Kraken265
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story very much so far. You do a good job detailing the action sequences very vividly, and the characters are quite interesting.
person Ymir
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! Interest rekindled.

I really liked that this chapter was less combat-based (got that feeling anyway), and that it created some more loose ends.
I feel that every chapter doesn't have to include combat - nothing wrong to focus on the story itself.
As always, you've left me eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :D
person vivarose
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, very descriptive fight scenes. Very well done, there were a few odd capitalizations that threw me off but aside from that near very good. Some of the scene switches were a bit confusing, although that could be due to the way the format shows up online, and took a re-read or two before I got them. You've expanded a bit on some characters, giving little tidbits here and there that spark the reader's interest in them. I look forward to the next chapter and to going deeper in to the WoW universe. :-)
person vivarose
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh you've definitely got me hooked now! Again, wonderful fight scenes, I always seem to have trouble conveying them, and the plot is thickening in a very nice manner, I look forward to your next update!