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ahhh shads...how beautiful is this last chapter? Definitely one of my favourites and I've had to spend some time figuring out exactly why I like it so much...apart from things like Shyla slumping against the door...that was really, really good hey, for some reason, I stuck in my mind. Maybe it's because of all the inner dialogue/dream stuff that gives the reader just enough info to reel them in and want to know more. Regardless, this is brilliant. ...onward for the big rescue! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next :D ya rock shads!

Hey' its good to see you back! I was wondering for a while there if you'd died on us, I see I've got some catching up to do on the story. *gets to reading*

This story is very well written. You do a wonderful job of developing your characters in a believable manner. And I love the way you represent the troll language!

Awesome chapter. Very sexy. ^_^ Great job.

Oh my shads... ::fans self:: ... Santy was good to you this year! That chapter was um...freaking hot? But I think that's an understatement...well done, at any rate. I loved it. Hope you had a good Christmas!

Shit!~ I can't believe I did it again! my stupid touch pad clicked the remove review button! Fark! They should have a little box pop up that says,, are you sure you want to delete this review or something like that for idiots like me who can't control their clicky things!!

I can't even remember what it said, but it no doubt would have said how brilliant this story is...deadset, I can't believe I did that again! Dammit!

Ah...brilliant! I love your fight scenes...and your humour, too cool shads, me fav net bloke!

And...you tell your crew to stop raiding southshore, especially when I need to finish a quest, and I'll never help in a raid on Cross roads again! lol...nah only joking, it's all too much fun :P

But that was great, seriously, it's exciting (and bloody good for us who hang for your story!) to see you update twice so quickly, but are you taking mind altering drugs or sommat? o.0

Good job, it was a great read :D

I love it! Brilliant brilliant brilliant as usual, I can't wait to see what the rogue in hiding is up to. I think you underestimate how well you portray your characters, in one chapter you were able to show us a cocky, control-freak Night Elf warrior who is all about glory, a malicious rogue who looks like she is gonna cause a crap load of trouble and laugh gleefully all the while (which is just too cool!), established Adonai as a reluctant hero and leader who only takes the reins so that no-one gets killed (the best kind!), and a dwarf who is obviously an engineer and an eager brawler...I love your writing style, it rolls along, builds excitement, and you just know it's going to lead up to a massive bang but you can't see it coming or guess what it will be...and then to make everyone's nerves SCREAM (ya sadist!) you leave us with a cliff hanger! Lol, I really, really enjoyed this! And I don't know about being everyone's favourite, I think I send most to sleep before they get to the juicy parts, whereas you just keep the interest going the entire time. don't underestimate how enjoyable your writing and your story is :P

"Shyla felt like she'd been struck in the face with a very fat kodo. No specific part, just like one had fallen from the sky and landed on her with all the grace of a suicidal zepplin passenger."

THAT would have to be the single, most bestest line on this entire site! I love it, and I love this chapter and this entire story. It's deep,has well timed snatches of humour, it flows, I love all the characters, especially Rajas the cranky bustard! it's just magic and well worth the wait. Even the title, "in case of chaos break human" lol hahaha I love it! You bring WoW to life.

Man I love this story! I love how you use so many different ways to tell it, through Journal entries, dreams, visions and etc. There is never a dull moment and it's just too bloody creative! This is the second time I've read it, and the second time is as good as the first, if not better...which is a rare, rare thing. I'm taking it slower this time though, so I can pay attention to every word and I'm stoked that it's still WIP, which means you HAVE TO GIVE US MORE!!!! hehehe, but as usual, shit-hot fight scenes and a variety of em...different lurve/smut scenes which are just as exciting as the fighting, and probably more importantly, a brilliant, original story-line. And as usual, I'm left gushing over this story.

(my turn!) DAMN YOU! lol

*moves fingers away from touch pad so said fingers don't delete the wrong things*

P.S. hehe, my big fat ranting authors notes are bigger than your big fat ones heh! ...only not as interesting and entertaining...doh!