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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, quite nice fic you have here, i'm liking it a lot so far and can't wait to see what happens next, hope you update this fic soon again!
As a side note, i would love to see either Titania/Boyd, since when i played the game myself and decided to try out support conversation between them, i found out something that made me think what this pairing might be like.
Of course, i'm also in the market for a Mia/Rhys pairing or a Lethe/Ike pairing, which is something i've been dying to see at least once, but its your choice, i'm just asking. Either way, i'm eagerly awaiting for the next installment of this fic!
As a side note, i would love to see either Titania/Boyd, since when i played the game myself and decided to try out support conversation between them, i found out something that made me think what this pairing might be like.
Of course, i'm also in the market for a Mia/Rhys pairing or a Lethe/Ike pairing, which is something i've been dying to see at least once, but its your choice, i'm just asking. Either way, i'm eagerly awaiting for the next installment of this fic!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Terrible.
Horrible characterization. In need of grammar and spelling. Dull way of writing. Utterly out of the blue with the lemon. Desperately in need of plot. Totally unrealistic things that totally kill the thing, turning it from an FE Lemon to a porno, such as Ike's nine-inch schlong.
In my opinion, needs to be more story, and less porno.
Horrible characterization. In need of grammar and spelling. Dull way of writing. Utterly out of the blue with the lemon. Desperately in need of plot. Totally unrealistic things that totally kill the thing, turning it from an FE Lemon to a porno, such as Ike's nine-inch schlong.
In my opinion, needs to be more story, and less porno.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok...a bit wierd, the lemon was short and it seemed to come out of nowhere, also, the idea seems ok, but a bit shakey, put more plot and try to catagorize the charectors better.
Other than that it seems ok...not the best though.
Other than that it seems ok...not the best though.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, the lemon between Marcia and Ike... yeah, you need more details and length on it, other than that, i have no complaints. I won't say anything about the characters, since i'm no expert on them myself, though the idea of Mia being depressed over Rhys is something that makes sense, and Gatrie being the perv.
But anyways, this seems like an interesting idea for a fic, and here are some ideas, since you asked:
first, the question about what pair should be next: I would definately like to see any of these, Soren/Lucia/Oscar, seeing those three either at the same time or taking turns would be interesting, then of course Lethe/Ike, i've always wanted to see one of those... especially after she finds out Marcia got to him first, hehehe. Nephenee/Boyd, that would also get my interest... and lastly, if possible, Mia/Mordecai. That last one might be tricky, but if possible i would like to see it.
As for fights... well, here is a VERY tricky one, not sure if possible at all, but how about make it so that Oliver resurrects Greil as a zombie? He doesn't know Greil was Ike's father, but when they meet....
Anyways, it's just an idea.
Hope to read more soon, you have some spelling errors in the fic, but nothing to really complain about.
But anyways, this seems like an interesting idea for a fic, and here are some ideas, since you asked:
first, the question about what pair should be next: I would definately like to see any of these, Soren/Lucia/Oscar, seeing those three either at the same time or taking turns would be interesting, then of course Lethe/Ike, i've always wanted to see one of those... especially after she finds out Marcia got to him first, hehehe. Nephenee/Boyd, that would also get my interest... and lastly, if possible, Mia/Mordecai. That last one might be tricky, but if possible i would like to see it.
As for fights... well, here is a VERY tricky one, not sure if possible at all, but how about make it so that Oliver resurrects Greil as a zombie? He doesn't know Greil was Ike's father, but when they meet....
Anyways, it's just an idea.
Hope to read more soon, you have some spelling errors in the fic, but nothing to really complain about.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok. better than most of the crap people have posted. a mia gangbang would be hot. but boyd/neph would be cool too. might want to get a beta.