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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shaping up nicely. Can't say I've played too much of the game, but I'd love to see something with Mordecai or Ranulf. And thank you for making the choice to not do any yuri or yaoi. I am severely tired of people making pairings where there cannot possibly be any. Oh, and could Mia be pregnant? Ike didn't pull out... Just pointing out that might be a possible twist (though potentially a pairing wrecking one).
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you got a little of SS in the story. I hope you write the next chapter soon!
looking foward to a Lethe/Ike lemon!
looking foward to a Lethe/Ike lemon!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ike/Lethe please. We need one.
Awesome work.
Awesome work.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't decide on just one. All of them sound good, but these are the three that I like the most:Ike/Lethe, Ike/Mia, Mia/gangbang.
Ciao!,4202
Ciao!,4202
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah nice chapter and i agree ike/mist lemon is kind of creepy. I understand Nepehenee's accent it's hard and stuff to do. I get why you didn't do it. I like how things are turning for Ike and Lethe, and they are my favorite pairing. However, for my vote i want ike/mai for the next chapter even if ike/lethe are my favorite pairing.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mia/Gangbang, it'd be interesting to see how you make it work.....
the idea is interesting, although I'd like a bit more backstory, plus Stefan needs an appearence or five, either killing an entire army of foes, or screwing Mia in a later scene, dunno
Keep up the work
the idea is interesting, although I'd like a bit more backstory, plus Stefan needs an appearence or five, either killing an entire army of foes, or screwing Mia in a later scene, dunno
Keep up the work
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, the lemon was certainly more improved than the previous one, add a bit more length and you'll have something good there!
Can't wait to see the Ike/Lethe lemon, i have searched and searched but never found one before, so please, i'm counting on you now. Also, for my vote, i would LOVE to see Mia/Ranulf lemon, when you mentioned it, it immediately caught my interest as well.
All in all, this chapter was worth the wait, and i hope the next one will be as well, so update when you can again!
Can't wait to see the Ike/Lethe lemon, i have searched and searched but never found one before, so please, i'm counting on you now. Also, for my vote, i would LOVE to see Mia/Ranulf lemon, when you mentioned it, it immediately caught my interest as well.
All in all, this chapter was worth the wait, and i hope the next one will be as well, so update when you can again!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, good, i didn't spot any immediate spelling errors with names in this chapter, so good job on that. The lemon, hmmm, it still felt sort of 'crude' to me, it didn't flow... or maybe it's just me, i don't know. Anyways, i'm interested on what happens next, and as for pairings... yes, that Soren/Lucia/Oscar would be something interesting to see indeed.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story so far! I'm intrested in seeing a Lethe/Ike Lemon nwxt, since thereis definatly not alot of Ike/Lethe-ness!
Looking foward to next Chap.
Looking foward to next Chap.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... this chapter was alright, but you kept writing 'Geril', that was not his name, it was 'Greil', please fix that, it makes just reading this chapter rather stupid.