rate_review Reviews

Uhm... i'm not sure what to write here...

Well, about your story, i though it was reeeaaally good. It's much more interesting than a lot of other stuff i've seen.
The whole thing about the heroes not being able to return to normal lives is clever, and i LOVE how twisted it all is!
I admire your imagination! ^__^
I love the characters roles, and all the punishment and stuff.

Please keep writing it!

Yay!

Did i write enough?

I'm really sorry if this isn't a proper review!

I was waiting to see if this fic would end up having redeeming features by the end, or if it was just going to be a pile of mediocre sex scenes that amount to no ultimate meaning beyond cheap and empty literary masturbation, before I reviewed. Since you're whining about it, though, yes, you have at least one reader, who is at least interested enough to see whether you will ultimately have direction with this.

DJ, with respect to Blair, that might be a long wait. I know the plot is still left as rather vague, but it's revolving around people who were revealed to be programs. As such, integrating Blair isn't meshing with my designs, but it could happen, just don't hold your breath.

And I am very glad someone else likes Welch. Definitely expect to see more of her.

yay, thank you!

this is a little dark for my tastes...but still cool and has potential! im happy to see ur including welch at least a little...for some reason i really, REALLY have a thing for her. if i coudl have one request, it would be for blair to come in, and her to have some fun with either welch or maria, maybe shes someone who can calm maria down or something? i dunno

o and its cool ur doing mirage and peppita for the person, i always thought mirage, being maria's "teacher" since she was young, might have a thing for yonger girls...

o yah and also i hope its not 2 much 2 ask but if u do my idea plz no guys around even if only watching? they just dont do it for me, sorry

i'd love to see mirage and peppita screw around...maybe while nel watched? or watched while forcing maria or welch to service her?