rate_review Reviews

Goddammit, this is the second time an author is so good at making a bitch in the story I have to throw something. (good job!) You really know how to make personalities, which is what I really am bad at, your storytelling and writing style make emotions come out very clearly, and your chapter sizes are just right. Twincesttwincesttwincest... oh.. sorry, just that ever since i've been reading this story *twincest* i've kinda had to *twincest* control my *twincest* urges of joy *twincest* because of a certain type of relationship *twincest* in this story... *TWINCEST*

Aww, poor Roxas. I just wanna pick him up and cuddle him. Then lock him in a "well stocked" bedroom with Sora and a video camera.

Enrapturing story, I don't think that the beginning was boring, I mean, you HAVE to start somewhere right? Umm, I may be retarded, but is chapter 2 missing? ^_^ I'm really excited to see what happens due to the cliffie on chapter 1 :P

Can't wait! (especially for teh incest!!!11 *shudders at the hearing of his own words*)

Enrapturing story, I don't think that the beginning was boring, I mean, you HAVE to start somewhere right? Umm, I may be retarded, but is chapter 2 missing? ^_^ I'm really excited to see what happens due to the cliffie on chapter 1 :P

Can't wait! (especially for teh incest!!!11 *shudders at the hearing of his own words*)

I hope you will continue PLEASE do I can't wait for more. :D

Aww, saddy :3

Yay! Twincest! I LOVE it!

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think the story is very powerful...
It has a strong longing, and a strong feeling for the two charicters...
I think you need to keep writing..!

Ooh! I really like this. I'm not a huge Sora/Roxas fan, but I do think it's cute. And this story definitely caught, and kept, my attention. I will wait anxiously for the next two parts! :D [And, yay, twincest! Mwuahaha.]