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for Xepher

by Hitoshirezu69

person Dragonboy
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well Roxas is in Sora's life again what'll happen? Exciting! It's ovious Kai is Tidus. or prehaps Hayner. *Fanboy imagines plot in mind*
MORE! SOON. The STORY IS GREAT!
person Fallen to the Slashy Side
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like a fine wine, this story gets better and better as time goes on. I especially like how moody and cruel Sora acts. I seriously love Mean!Sora. You are really a great writer. Bravo, bravo!
person Yami-Echo
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
May I just say that I absolutely love this book?

Your descriptions and writing style are laid out so well; the entire story pretty much screams angst. It was chilling, ad at times you sorta want to turn away, but your words and secriptions, the tensin in the air just draws you right back in again. I can't WAIT for the next chapter!
person Dj Max 828
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Super Storie PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue Along With This Story Is Sooooooooo Very Exllecent And I Would Love To Find Out What Happens Next. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. :D :) :D
person Halfnium
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU! [points] Are fucking AWESOME!!!!

If you continue this, I will love you forEVER! And you even get a free leg hump for your work! XD
person Migueru
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh... I was like crying the whole time...so sad... this is a really beautiful story~! Hope you'll update soon *sniffles*
person Vaed
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... what a scandal... and what a turn for the worst too. What a bitch, that mother, I thought that she would have a change of heart, but NOOO the little whore! I keep looking back at Sora at the intro and keep thinking "How's he still like that? Oh wait... he forgot" XD I really liked this chapter, keep it up!
person Sekre
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was violent-y. :)
person baddaytoday
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just wow. This story's so dark, yet I can't stop myself to dwell in it. You've done a good job in describing the character's emotion. I especially like the third chapter! I like this story~~ Good luck!!
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT Storie Every Chapter Gets More And More Interesting This Storie Is Really Good Keep Up The
Exellcent Work And Please UpDate As Soon As Possible. :D