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I hope you'll do a few more chapters So we could atlest see how the beginning happens

Hey this is a nice, a different concept for a story, one that is mainly about OCs

I'm really hoping to read more of this

I like the way this starting out and like the characters. I'm looking forward to see what happens to the main character

Nice fic I hope you keep it up I'm a huge fan of your other story and I can tell that this one could be just as good. I must say that the characters are great even though they are original charcters they are just as good as the ones from they game. It's nice to see a original story also. Love the main character and her personality and it will be nice to see how events will chage her it also it will be nice to see if she'll lose her taboos about sex with a women. I really love your stories and I was wondering if you ever thought about writing something about Suikoden 1 maybe just a oneshot with Tir and Kasumi

Awesome chapter 1 nice setup. You have to write more.

I really enjoy the descriptions of the family and their personalities.The scene with the twins measuring their cocks was great boy that gave me a laugh. I love Alessa and want to know more about her background and past. I liked the scene where Lady Falta was trying to get Alessa search Relnar it was funny but also show a form of friendship because of the fact she could have just order her into a threesome but instead tries seduce her. Thanks for writing this

Hmm, a nice little start Sort of got me wanting see more but only if it doesn't take time away from your other story unless you just need a break from the other story

hey this look as it could be realgood.I'll have to atlest read one more chapter before I can really judge it

Nice open, really got me wanting to see more. I like the family and the way they act