rate_review Reviews

Very hot. You do a great job describing not only the sex but also the cute little awkward moments. I doubt Ashley would be that inexperienced, but it works very nicely in this fic. Love it!

I enjoyed this story. ^^ I love this pairing. There should be way more of them. Thank you for this fanfic.
~Brittany Sambrano

MEOW! That was AWESOME!!! :)

For PWP it's fairly good. Spelling could use some work in a couple of places and it would help to break those paragraphs up into smaller bits. Otherwise, I liked it.

I read both your new stories and I have to say that i like this the best as Leonx Ashley pairing is my favourite.
You did make errors in your story and you should clean it up ASAP. It really deters from flowing correctly when a reader reads it, especially when the reader is good at spelling and/or grammar. Another thing, you should not be insecure about your work or feel you will get negative reviews. Most people on this site are very professional and don't harass others.

It's pretty damn good, but there are few errors on this story.

It is a good PWP but there were a couple places where you may need spell checking. For example you wrote "There" when it should have been "their" and other words which are very simplistic. We all make spelling and grammar errors but you need to look over things maybe rereading them would help.^__^

wow. wow wow. that was hawt. ashley getting on all fours and wow wo wwowowowowwowow.