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August 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this story is awesome!
In fact, it inspired me to write one of my own. Do you mind my borrowing an idea or two from this one? I can't see my idea working unless they're there. But I would like permission before using them. Please?
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. Hope to see more soon. Hey! Are Jak and Torn gunna get together? Ooh ooh What's Erol gunna do to Jak in prison?
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful so far, it’s so refreshing to see Torn act so ruthless (Being the commander of the Krimzon Guard he’d have to be don’t you think) Very well done I eagerly await the rest.