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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Firstly I though this is a badfic. But now I love it. The story is great and he had rates that were brought me to laugh. [Sorry for my bad English]
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one, I think you did a good job! Hmmm... I can't give any advice because I don't see anything wrong with it. Keep up the great work!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its well written with little typos and grammar errors, but theres some OOCness going on with the characters, however, its still good. Just wanted you to know that there's out of character going on.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm actually surprised. I clicked on this expecting some childish drivel, but intead recieved a nicely written (abit short) kinky little story. The pairings are not my favorite, (Salazar creeps me out for some reason...) but from your writing, I was able to still enjoy it. Nice work! :)
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be the lovliest threesome in the entire RE slash universe. Salazar/Mendez/Saddler is the best ever. I was thinking of writing this threesome, but you got to it first and it's adorable! For your first fic, it's a sensually delightful read. :D
Your execution was handled well enough and the sex scenes weren't too rough, like rape, but surprisingly soft....
Your execution was handled well enough and the sex scenes weren't too rough, like rape, but surprisingly soft....
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe i like how u talked about salazars shorter cock. hehe dat was gud.