rate_review Reviews

Very nice. Please continue.

I really enjoyed reading this so far, I wish i could write something half as good as this.
I have six chapters to my story so far but i don't think it's as good as this.. kudos budd!

~Manis

I find that Tira and Siegfried romance is qwite a brillent story concept. Tira, a shifting chaotic swell between a child like innocence from a person that's was lost so long ago and the sadistc murderest breeded into her very being. Siegfried, man in consent search for redemption for crimes of a monster he was but never was. the shere lonelyness of Siegfried and the consent struggle of between Tira's sides of her personaliaty

Oh, yes. This just came to me. I've noticed that the story is pretty isolated. WHen I say that, I mean there's been no character interaction between enyone but Tira, Nightmare, and Seigfreid. Maybe head out into the worl a bit? Whatever. Just a reviewer's opinion.

Interesting chapter. Thanks for the little review reply. I appreciate it. I know what it's like to lose a beta. (albeit I rarely need them thanks to my prodigious ((around 14th year college coming from a deceptively young person)) ) By the way, if you ever need one, I'm glad to help.

Now, on to the review.

This one was pretty strange. Tira seemed.... unusually normal. Almost sane. Her love of blue seemed to strike me as nonsense. her excitement over Seigfried was understandable. The clear thinking shtick (I'm guessing it was a joke of sorts,) was interesting but not brought out too well. It seemed to lack the sort of irony that makes you chuckle.

And a few forotten notes from the third chapter; the limish lemon was pretty good. It obviously isn't as good as, say, a Jackalmann lemon, but respectable, especially for a first fic. Lemon-O-meter: 7.4

Not bad, sir/madam. It certainly beats my first try into a bloody pulp. Well, I myself enjoy nice, long chapters I noticed one or two spelling errors here and there, but nothing unforgivable. (As a hint, one of them are the words death THROUGHS not throws.) You fit her bipolar personality quite well. I'm not sure if bipolars REALLY switch personalitys that fast, but it was still well personified.

I hope to see more of your work,

Xion

Nice work. Please keep at it.

Is this Siegfried x Tira or Nightmare x Tira. I hope it's the latter one, because I can kinda see that coming.