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for Defeat

by xFlurryxOfxFlamesx

person Toshiya_Neko
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A viwe powerful and moving noncon fic -nodnod-
you should DEFINATELY make more of 'em, but this was a GREAT one-shot.
*gives you the internet*
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was so difficult to defeat Seph in KH1 (still hasn't beaten KH2 seph),
So good~ but I still think Larxene would have been there T_T /likes Larxene/
A few of the people were hard to figure out...the scientist could have been Vexen or Zexion to me...
Bottom Line: Noncon~! It was hawt! ^^
person FlurryxOfxFlames
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Re: Anon

:) The Scientist was Vexen. I could see how that would be confusing but I gave it away l8ter in the fic when describing the brown haired man and lavender haired boy standing together against the wall. Zexion wrinkled his nose at the smell of the dungeon, giving my readers the hint that the electricity delivering man was Vexen. :) I think I made everyone else pretty obvious though. :} :} Thanx 4 your review. <3