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for The Reason

by Sammei

person Yaoichi
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see an update, even if it was very (too?) short. As for WAFFing; it can certainly be WAFF and still be smutty. If you're in a lemony mood with this, bring it on :) No need to, though. Do what you think feels right for the story.
person Neverland
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, and I'd like to see it expand. Much of the time, people emphasize Hwoarang's bad-boy tendencies and skimp on his emotions, other than the consistency of him never trusting anything immediately. I like your approach just as much.
person tay
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is deep. It was funny too at that part when Jin told Myuu to stop ogling the customers. I'll be looking for more
person tay
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is deep. It was funny too at that part when Jin told Myuu to stop ogling the customers. I'll be looking for more
person Living_Thing
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh~~ Jin n Hwo....*drools over laptop*. Such a piece of art.... You have got to continue!!! And don't be discouraged with the number of hits!
person Yaoichi
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's a very good start :) I hope you can keep to that WAFFy feeling throughout... makes the story cute, and good multi-part WAFFs are so hard to come by!
person HollowSoul
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. You HAVE to continue. Please update soon. ^^