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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great, dooley and Twonk not getting along in the beginning. xD
I'm liking the plot a lot more too. ^o^
Keep it up and keep me posted. ^.^
I'm liking the plot a lot more too. ^o^
Keep it up and keep me posted. ^.^
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the Dooleys, Twonk rivalry, them even continuing it during sex. XD
"Twonk stole lots of ramen, and Dooley stole lots of cheese." That sentence made me laugh. Yup, we are theives of a different kind.
"Oh great, just what I need... another nutcase Snidne thought as he walked to his office." XD
I really like how you bring the Gaia story background into it. It really adds a lot to the overall story. I'm so used to the TOS Misadventures... Can't wait for the next one. =3
"Twonk stole lots of ramen, and Dooley stole lots of cheese." That sentence made me laugh. Yup, we are theives of a different kind.
"Oh great, just what I need... another nutcase Snidne thought as he walked to his office." XD
I really like how you bring the Gaia story background into it. It really adds a lot to the overall story. I'm so used to the TOS Misadventures... Can't wait for the next one. =3
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome! xD
You getting pushed around in the pool, everyone having a good time....dooley especially. ;)
But yet, great story overall. ^.^
Can't wait for the next one! ^o^
You getting pushed around in the pool, everyone having a good time....dooley especially. ;)
But yet, great story overall. ^.^
Can't wait for the next one! ^o^
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The background stuff in the beginning was nice. =3 Twonk and Infernas are lucky Snidne has his wine to relax him. XD Dooleys fantasizing about Snidne...now that was interesting.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD Nice. Interesting toys Isha has. With her love of explosions, I would be a bit afraid. Ooh, Infernas stealing from his boss. So busted...
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular! :D
I really liked the explanation of everyone's relationships with each other. *nods*
And more background info was a definate plus! +
Keep it up Snidne, you're doing Great!
I really liked the explanation of everyone's relationships with each other. *nods*
And more background info was a definate plus! +
Keep it up Snidne, you're doing Great!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great start to the series. So emotional and such. And very real. =3 Snidne does too much work. He needs a girlfri- *gets pummeled and chased* XD
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent place for your stories Snidne! =O
I think you'll get more feed back here than on Gaia and hopefully a few good critics to help you along the way. Good Luck in the future of you stories. 8)~b
I think you'll get more feed back here than on Gaia and hopefully a few good critics to help you along the way. Good Luck in the future of you stories. 8)~b