rate_review Reviews

if u actually knew anything about female anatomy, u could have prolly written a better story, this 1 was a real disappointment

"I'll people this land with a hundred little mes!"

Oh god, did I *laugh*. This must have been so fun to write, because it was definitely fun to read. Great job. I want chapter two! :D

This is sexy and hilarious story.

Update.

Mm, that's a nice story. Flows well without becoming obtuse. The characters worked well, and the like/spot on jokes were fun, although I thought about whether there would be a more discreet way of pointing it out. Also, it was a bit strange to be clamoring about her likely pregnancy that soon, but if it's a special fetish. Anyways, nice read.