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Wow! That's quite interesting--poor James! You wrote beautifully, barely a mistake I could discern. As for what's to come next, I can't wait :3 I like you portrayed Valtiel--he reminds me of Pyramid head in how commanding he is, despite being silent.

I also liked the incident with the radio and, earlier, the backseat of the car. ...Haha, that sounds naughty. XD *cough* Anyway, lookin' forward to what you have planned next :3

~the seph

please update soon i already love this story sooooooooo much even though it just started. it makes me really happy to read this and i really like the telephone conversation, is my favorite part. i also like how they seem soooooooo eager to see and touch and practically anything to do with him. ok i just love all of it. i can wait for the next part. and like i said on your first story here, i uasually dont read reated R fics and this is the firat one i really like. ^_^

I'm continually impressed with the quality of your stories and I've loved all of your Silent Hill fics so far. The thing that impresses me most in this story is the dialog. I can't tell you how many times I've read fics here and thought to myself "nobody talks like that" or "who would say that?" but you've really managed to make the conversations seem realistic. Frank talks to James the way I think a father would talk to a grieving son and then when Frank tries to rationalize the strange events James' outbursts are exactly the kind of reaction I'd expect.

Of course, since I do love my smut, I can't wait for Pyramid Head to get his hands on James. Also I read on your LJ that you're thinking of continuing Your Dark God. This makes me very happy indeed =D. I eagerly, if impatiently, await more from you.

how sad u only got 5 reviews. you need more because you seem to work hard at it. keep it up!

&#$*n sjf O.O!!!

This... is awesome~~~ New chapter please! XD Inb all seriousness, I LOVE where this is going, and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. :3

Lookin' forward to it eagerly!

~the seph

Leaving my review as promised. I like the whole idea actually, the "what if's" of all canon characters if events were handled or happened differently. Good set up of the funeral, and the relationship with his father (which you don't see too much) was well done. I myself really like Frank...he seems concerned about everyone...and not some aloof old man. The store scene was handled well, and generated a good amount of creepiness. Sets the tone for the rest of the story, as well as the "under bed scene." Nice work luv.... :)

I love it and can't wait for the next part. Update soon and keep up the wonderful work!

Oh boy. I really really am looking forward to the next update. I love your stories. Very gothic-like. Can't wait to read what happens next.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAy! YOU PUT UP A NEW STORY I'M SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORIES.