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lol! the scene were valtiel chases james made me laugh. same were he runs from Red P' and Valteil starts mocking him. but whats with the valve? Did I miss soemthing?

your story is the best story in the shilet hill area evah! ^___^

OMG!!!!
I've never read Silent Hill fiction before, but, OMG!!!!
I love it!!!
I'm begging you, please write the next chapter soon!!!!

oh please update its almost been a month. i really wish to read more of this story, hope to see more soon. ^_^

Omg, wow. You're so good. o.o Wonderful detail, I could feel everything. XD Whee! <3

Fwaaaa. *w* So.. awesome. I love you. You should update. XD Nyehe.

Holy crap....I really, really love this. My fave scene thus far has been the car seat....I was really impressed by it.
I love your use of language and your writing voice.

I eagerly await more!

- ix-tab

Sorry it took me so long to get over here and review. I think through most of this chapter James is really pushing it with Valtiel...lol, trying his patience. I did wish that James and Val would of played a bit more at the end here, but if you are willing to indulge me in the next chapter, then I'll wait. A nasty little threesome just popped in my head with Valtiel, PH and James...but poor James probably wouldn't be able to walk after that...(among other things, LOL)

Is Frank going to rescue James eventually? I hope he will--he seems the type to protect his family at all costs. Not sure how you'll end this, but it's something to think about...

Till next time.

I loved it but I hated the cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next part, please update soon, I want to know what's going to happen next!

Oh noes cliffhanger! You must write more, this story is soooo amazing! Sorry for the utterly gushing review but I love this story!