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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see that you updated. Wonderful, I can't wait for the next part, to see what's going to happen next. Keep it up!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! The atmosphere and sensations were very well described and painted a vivid picture. Only bad thing was the description of the positions various limbs were in and various manuvers between Val and James were confusing at times. But it was still pretty well written.
I find it all very interesting. PH and Val can be so cruel, yet so likable. It's interesting to see the moments of tenderness or concern that arise so subtley in them despite their tormenting James and the things they say about torture. (I realy like Val's bouts of poetry) I'm realy curious about what exactly they feal reguarding James. Val seems to have romantic interest in James though he pretty much denied it when he told PH he's just as soon fuck him as James. I'm interested in seeing how you will explore the complexities of the interplay of their demonic nature and any fealings they have for James. Clearly there's more there than pure lust. PH and Val clearly seem to have a friendship, or else how would they get along despite diferences.... such as when Val branded James. And Val certainly has seemed concerned with James' welfare when he held James too warm and still him, and when he worried aloud about the transformation's toll on James. I can't wait to see diologue between them again.... and see where that goes. And I'm still waiting for the sex. lol Leading us on like that! Shame on you! :p
The overall concept raises questions, too. Sounds like you have a lot more planed than a slash fic, what with the discussion of 'god' and 'paradise' between PH and Val. Sounds like this transformation poor James is undergoing is only the begining of a bigger plot... am I right?
Man, I sure feal sorry for James... even moreso since he didn't do anything to diserve such suffering. Poor guy. I hope he finds some comfort after the transformation is complete. And I hope Val and PH take some pitty on the poor soul. 0_o
I find it all very interesting. PH and Val can be so cruel, yet so likable. It's interesting to see the moments of tenderness or concern that arise so subtley in them despite their tormenting James and the things they say about torture. (I realy like Val's bouts of poetry) I'm realy curious about what exactly they feal reguarding James. Val seems to have romantic interest in James though he pretty much denied it when he told PH he's just as soon fuck him as James. I'm interested in seeing how you will explore the complexities of the interplay of their demonic nature and any fealings they have for James. Clearly there's more there than pure lust. PH and Val clearly seem to have a friendship, or else how would they get along despite diferences.... such as when Val branded James. And Val certainly has seemed concerned with James' welfare when he held James too warm and still him, and when he worried aloud about the transformation's toll on James. I can't wait to see diologue between them again.... and see where that goes. And I'm still waiting for the sex. lol Leading us on like that! Shame on you! :p
The overall concept raises questions, too. Sounds like you have a lot more planed than a slash fic, what with the discussion of 'god' and 'paradise' between PH and Val. Sounds like this transformation poor James is undergoing is only the begining of a bigger plot... am I right?
Man, I sure feal sorry for James... even moreso since he didn't do anything to diserve such suffering. Poor guy. I hope he finds some comfort after the transformation is complete. And I hope Val and PH take some pitty on the poor soul. 0_o
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...i love you XD.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again, this story is awesome and I wish you would add more chapters to it, I like how Frank becomes protective of his son once the creepy phonecalls start coming in and leads me to believe that maybe Frank knows more about Pyramid Head, Silent Hill, and Vatiel a bit more than he lets on to James; which leads me to suspect that part where he calls James as a "missing person" as if it was his only way to protect James somehow.
Also I can't wait to see which one will molest James I like how you are using the theory of James creating the monsters from his own guilt like some suggest in the SH2 game. And yet you do it in a very unique way. Great job!
I look foreward to more updates on the chapter very soon.
Also I can't wait to see which one will molest James I like how you are using the theory of James creating the monsters from his own guilt like some suggest in the SH2 game. And yet you do it in a very unique way. Great job!
I look foreward to more updates on the chapter very soon.
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your descriptions astound me. Even if I had never played Silent Hill, I'm sure by the way you describe things I'd know what it looked like. Niiice.
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! It's funny, I never got to play SH, only saw someone else playing it, AND I didn't see the movie.... but here I am, absolutely loving this fic. (did do some research so I understand concept & characters) Valtiel is a facinating character from what I learned of SH3...mysterious and intriguing. I love what you are doing with the concept. I especialy like how his human apearance he takes on is still rather creepy. To be honest, I'm not sure wich form I find sexier...'human' Val or inhuman Valtiel. I'm realy looking forward to what happens next.
I'd also like to specificaly congratulate you on that bit of diologue where Valtiel talks about his disguest for humanity.... That was fantastic! You realy give a good reson for these beings to be so rough and at-odds with humanity. Best of all it's too true.... I used to frequent OccultForums and it amazed me how people of all paths would talk about gods, daemons, and angels as though they were merely a means to an end... "oh, wich godess do you use" asks a Wiccan. It's no wonder the 'gods' of old nearly left us behind. 0_o And then there's the summoning and binding bit that so many daemons are subjected to, yet they are forever labeled 'evil' in most people's eyes. Boy oh boy are there going to be a lot of occultists finding their own personal 'Silent Hill' when they reach the other side of that vale! I think that's the best thing about your writing...the denizens of your Silent Hill aren't evil villains, they are just a diferent race than humanity and are sick of human hypocracy. Simply looking to further their own goals just as humans always have. Briliant and refreshing! ^-^
Please update soon. I'm already thinking about fan art based on this. ^-^ (You can find some of my work at FanArtCentral under the same name I use here. ;)
I'd also like to specificaly congratulate you on that bit of diologue where Valtiel talks about his disguest for humanity.... That was fantastic! You realy give a good reson for these beings to be so rough and at-odds with humanity. Best of all it's too true.... I used to frequent OccultForums and it amazed me how people of all paths would talk about gods, daemons, and angels as though they were merely a means to an end... "oh, wich godess do you use" asks a Wiccan. It's no wonder the 'gods' of old nearly left us behind. 0_o And then there's the summoning and binding bit that so many daemons are subjected to, yet they are forever labeled 'evil' in most people's eyes. Boy oh boy are there going to be a lot of occultists finding their own personal 'Silent Hill' when they reach the other side of that vale! I think that's the best thing about your writing...the denizens of your Silent Hill aren't evil villains, they are just a diferent race than humanity and are sick of human hypocracy. Simply looking to further their own goals just as humans always have. Briliant and refreshing! ^-^
Please update soon. I'm already thinking about fan art based on this. ^-^ (You can find some of my work at FanArtCentral under the same name I use here. ;)
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude. This is amazing. Seriously, best SH fic I've ever read. You gotta update, I'm on the edge of my seat, here!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update this story! Everything about it is great and makes me want to read more!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is good! Don't stop this story! I SOOOO want to see the slash between Valtiel and James this story kicks ass! I love it!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please, I beg of you to hurry with the next chapter! I'm dying to know what happens! Is there going to be major ValtielxJames action, or PyramidheadxJames? AAAAAAAAAHHH! And will his Dad (James' dad) even make it to Silent Hill? *turns Chibi and cries* SOOoo many questions, and with absolutely NO answers!!!! *continues crying* I have literally read the past five chapters too many times to count! AND I even read EVERY PyramidheadxJames and WalterxHenry fic on this site! I have too much time on my hands! I just went back to school two days ago, because of Christmas break! So, plese just hurry! Your fic is the PyramidheadxJames fic that I am truly in LOVE with, and devoted to! Please don't suddenly drop this story, I loves it too muches! (yes, typos were on purpose). Anyway, you're a great author(ess) and I will continue to wait as patiently as I know how. Ja Ne!