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by Chaosdreamer

person FlightofDarkness
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I *adore* this. It's incredibly drawing and horrifying like the game, and yet I can't look away. I love how you write the events and the city; so real! I like the characterization and the details, while terrifying, are really well done. Wonderful, wonderful work. I look forward to more of this level of awesomeness. ^.^ Good luck with upcoming chapters!
person Udyjay
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
X3 ... Dood! That was hot! THEYNEEDTODOITALREADYYYYY. Whee! xD You're so freaking good at this, I swear. Updaaaaate, pweeeease? I never say pwease, so, that means I'm DESPARATE.
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I came across something on U-Tube that reminded me of your fic... It's a BuckTick music video called "You're my Disease" and Atsushi looks and acts exactly how you described Valtiel's human form. Thought you'd get a kick out of it. And of course, the sexyness. :D http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7wJNf7TD84&mode=related&search= Hope you update, soon! I'm almost done with the fanart I promised. :D
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@ EssenticSage: lol, I didn't realize at first how funny my "concern" review sounded but know I do, lol that would be quite interesting but that I am sure is left to be decided for another story. And you should make your art I haven't seen alot of Adult Silent Hill artwork up here so that would be fun!

To the author: Seriously, don't keep us in suspence and maybe have Frank try to rescue his son or destroy the monsters! Weeee!
person Liliath
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot o_o prolly too much but yay, a chapter 8333 update soon, I'll be waiting :D!
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"What is going to happen to James is he going to die? Are they still going to screw him hard!?! "

XD Hopefuly not in that order.... LMAO! Just wanted to mention a peice of fan art is on the way. ;) Keep writing. :D Keep inspiring my fan art. (and decidedly pervy fanart, but of course)
person ixtab
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heheh, just re-reading because I'm injured and feel the urge for comfort fic...yes it's messed up that I find reading this comforting.
It's still awesome, and improves as I re-read it. I really, really like your Pyramid Head, a lot. I love the way he and Vatiel's voices are represented. They remind me of a more terrifying version of Death from Discworld! ;p

Well, I'm off to eat painkillers and icecream, but chances are I'll read this again before the day is out.
Thanks once more for writing it.
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O

What is going to happen to James is he going to die? Are they still going to screw him hard!?! Please keep this up I can't stand the suspence I have to know what happens next!
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy chapter, but you know why I like it so much...now, if you would only stop teasing...

Sorry it has taken so long to get over here and review...just been a bit busy. I like the sensuality of both Valtiel and PH...and I really liked it when Valtiel said "What the fuck is this?" It made me crack up, even though I know it wasn't meant as funny--but for some reason I just kept imagining his expression (if he had one.) when he said that. I would love a full out threesome...but I respect your plot and if that is impossible to inject...then I'll just have to accept that. LOL. Anyway, wonder how James is going to get out of this mess, and I also wonder if Frank will save the day. For some reason, I really like Frank. Hmm, maybe because he reminds me of my grandpa a little...could be.
person ixtab
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter six is everything I'd been waiting for, and more. It's wonderful, frankly.
Poor, beautiful, tortured James. He's so pretty when he suffers.

I really enjoy the voices that you give Vatiel and Pyramid Head. They work perfectly within the characters.

Looking forward to more!