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by Chaosdreamer

person ruenesca
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing. I have to say, I have read many Silent Hill fan fiction stories, and this is by far the best that I have thus had the privilege of encountering. The plot is highly intriguing, and the characterization of both Valtiel and Pyramid Head is amazing. There aren't a lot of stories featuring Valtiel sadly, and I love the way your portray him. Sadly I see that some time has passed since your last update, but I hope that one day you will choose to resume this excellent story!
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update soon, this story is too good to not be finished!
person mneiai
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read this fic a few times, now, and I just really love it. The ideas behind it are very interesting and the mystery of what comes next intriguing. I hope that, if you're not going to continue, that you'd considering posting up a summary of where the fic would have gone and how it would have ended. Thanks for putting out such a fascinating piece!
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome and amazing. The way you write is just so cool and great, you flesh out everything and the story was just great, I mean I really felt for James and the everything that happened to James was just so creature of Silent Hill like, and Valtiel he really fits as a resident. The everything about this story is just so cool and amazing. Please continue soon and also keep up the great writing you are an amazing author.
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know it's been a year but please, you have to keep going. This is by far one of my favorites and I desperately want more. Keeping me up till 4:30 AM rereading it, tsk, anyway, please keep going.
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is so amazing!!! it's currently my favorite story, thank you for posting it!
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are Sreoisuly the bset Slinet Hlil Fnaifc Wiretr Eevr!!!
Pelsae Wirte Mroe!!!
person silver13
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! love it so far. Keep updating.
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read this story more than twice (actually I've lost the count LOL). This story is just too beautiful and well made! Even the plot is so damn interesting I just can't stop thinking/re-reading the story over and over again! And omg, I love how you make James sound so fragile and clinging desperately in his hope to see his father again yet Valtiel think differently (I can't help but to faint at chp 7 ending part lol)

I wonder... is chp7 is the end of the story? Or will you be continuing with it? I'm so curious for what happened to James and Frank. And what will Pyramid Head and Valtiel will do to James. Keep up the good work and continue please XD I'm more than eager to read the next chapter.
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a delicious story. And it's all the more entertaining for James being unwilling-ly willing! *grins* I'm pleased you went with the "PH looks like James" theory (does this make it twincest?), instead of making him some twisted Gary Stu. THAT would be scary!

All in all, I'm enjoying this fic, and I hope you'll keep at the erotic horror genre!