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LOVE IT!!!! Please update!!!! I'm begging you!!!!!! I really want to know what happens next!!!!! Using my imagination is not the same as reading it!!!!!!!

I really hope you right more~ You would not believe how many times I've reread this story in the past few days. I love the descriptions so much, you really aren't afraid to make things as bloody as possible and it's wonderful. How in the last chapter you wrote James skin cracking and burning off him, I quite enjoyed it. The whole story flows wonderfully, I love how it starts slowly with the phone calls and each passing sentence builds the fear and horror. You've made this my OT3 and I adore you for it.

O.O
I am stunned. Wow. Epic.
This is the greatest story I have ever read. I think I just saw a star being born.

Please more! This story is soooo good, and Im not even a Silent Hill fan! I love how you describe everything, and detail it well you have! Its amazing, please dont stop! You got me sitting on the edge of my seat!

OMFG!!! I love this fic. I love you. You are absolutely amazing at writing. The depth's and emotions you bring out from the characters are bang on and your descriptions are simply amazing. I sincerely hope you continue with this story, it's beyond beautiful. You have a gift and I thank you for sharing it with the world.

...I'm sure you're told this, many, many times. But you're a truly an amazing author.
I mean, I could practically _feel_ the emotion coming from the words, it made me feel quite emotional.
Thank you very much for uploading this, it was time well spent.

Uguh, I shouldn't be all emotional like this. ;_;
Anyway, I hope you continue to upload.
-Requiem.

I had the lucky opportunity to find this piece of art recently, and I immediately devoured all the seven chapters that are currently up. I need to say that this might be one of the best fictions I have read in my life - and I do read a lot.

I loved your characterizations; The beginning really made me feel James' loss and sorrow, and the chapters with his father in the beginning were amazingly soft and lovely, at least in my eyes. The "hauntings" were superb and incredibly well-written, too! I also adore your characterizations of both Pyramid Head and Valtiel. Especially the latter gave me goosebumps all over!

I cannot wait for the next chapter. I hope you will update this, for this is a great story with superb writing!

- Melianawe [Espadas.livejournal.com]

I wanted to wait until I read all the chapters to review. First off, this is the very first Silent Hill slash I've ever read--out of morbid curiosity I looked it up actually, not really expecting to see it--and the first time I've ever reviewed anything on this site. The scene of James being pulled under the bed at the beginning was so chilling, if the space under my own bed wasn't filled with junk I would've checked under it. I also like this back-and-forth between Valtiel and Pyramid Head--not sure if this is a recurring thing in Silent Hill slash but it's both funny and twisted. And the things they say to James seem true to their characters. Also enjoyed the rebirth sequence, very prettily detailed on the agony of everything clashing so much with the pleasure beforehand. The bizarre near-threesome scene in the restaurant was also very descriptive and intense, especially liking the part where Pyramid Head and Valtiel get distracted when they bump heads. This story left me very absorbed and eager to get to the next chapters. Great so far! I hope you post soon!

First of all let me say, wow. I recently played Silent Hill 2 (long time coming eh?) and thought to myself, 'what the hell!' So i checked out the fanfics for it. Coming Home caught my immediate interest, so i clicked on the link. Lets just say i stayed up until six in the morning reading it. I can not believe how utterly enthralling and beautifully dark this fic is! From the strangely tender, yet very dominating relationship between Pyramid Head, Valtiel and James, to the wonderfully descriptive scenes of horror and gore. It was all so incredibly enrapturing. I have to constantly remind myself while playing the game that Pyramid Head will not gently caress James cheek...a shame really. ;) I also enjoyed the relationship between Frank and his son, I think it was very well placed and could be completely believable for the two. And that last scene between Pyramid Head and James was delicious, more then once I forgot to breathe. Whew!
I have no idea if you are going to continue this fic or not, but if you do know that you have a new fan, as this is possibly my favorite fic of all time. (Well, yours and Twig Collins', A Long Hard Road)
Awesome. :)

I hope, you'll update this story one day. It's so very emotinal and so very silent hillish ^^