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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When will you write more? Soon, pretty please.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Sweet, sweet revenge. I like how you wrote this too, just the way everything was thrown back into his face as cruel as he [I'm sure] gave it.
Sends shivers up my spine.
Sends shivers up my spine.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The ending was unexpected, I'll give you that.I thought it was from Jak's POV all the way until I read that part. Great story, looking forward to your next fic.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Wonderful! I'd never thought of something like this and now that you've wrote it it makes me wonder why more of Jak getting revenge against Errol hasn't been written.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGAWD. Jak can be so cruel! And I like how Erol finally got what he deserved. Cruel, but justified. Very well written! I wonder how Erol feels now, will he ever truly be sorry? I guess we'll never know. Anyways, keep up the good work and write more!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^-^ I liked! hope to see more of your work.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I GIVE IT FOUR FUCKING STARS!!! I loved it because jakky's finally got his revenge! it's somewhat a happy ending! Too bad many REAL rape victims can't do that. NOW WRITE MY story! XD!!! just kidding!