rate_review Reviews

The only Resident Evil game I have ever played, is director's cut for the PS one. That game was alright XD made me jump every now and then, but the game is ok; not my favorite.

I was a bit lost at first when I was reading this since I ain't familiar with the RE 4 characters and all but I got comfortable later on. You still write well Pandora which I already knew this since you ARE :) one of my favorite authors. The sex scene is yummy XD hehehe. I don't believe I saw any mistakes.

I read the first chapter in case you're wondering which piece I am refering to.

Keep up the good work and don't let assbites or jealous authors bring you down.

You're doing just fine in your writing so no worries ;)

You know, reading about all this pussy-eating makes for an interesting experience while enjoying a tuna sandwich, haha XD. OK, first I should point out a couple of minor things. Just before the first scene break, I think it should be "either woman", not "women", as it's referring to both of them already with the either, just a tiny technical detail. On the plus side though, "Mister Three" made me grin.

Onto the story as a whole, this was unashamedly feminine, and I could almost imagine the author just mentally revelling in the female form, it oozed from the description of hot tasty pussy and large enticing breasts, and all that other savouring language implied. The plagas and clone use allow for some otherwise way OOC situations, too, so in the end what you have is both original and intense, and overall, really, really good 8).

Thanks for the catch, Tyrant Hamster. I was in such a rush to get that up for the weekend that when I proof-read it, I was mainly looking for big misspelled words and bad grammar. Reading your review (well, all of them actually) put a big smile on my face. -reading about all this pussy-eating makes for an interesting experience while enjoying a tuna sandwich- That made me laugh soo hard!

I am not much into girl action,but you did a decent job of this. Its qute funny too. Your stories are good, ladies.

*sigh* I love it when Leon gets laid. I absolutely love it. He's such a STUD! Lovely job my friend!

Really liked it! keep up the good work

All I have to say is...the Ada clone is a slut. I think you all will make her fuck everyone before the fic is done. She loves Ashley's lovin'....that part made me laugh, but at the same time was pretty damn hot.

Oooh nice. Loved the first scene, but also loving how the story has moved on a bit with more plans folding, that makes the other scenes better when it's not just mindless fucking and nothing else. :D

My dear heavens. I wasn't expecting that at all! The whole panty gag thing...that's totally a rapist move, but Ada (erm, your clone) was totally loving it. The details were pretty nice without going over the top, but I think the real Ada should have had more to do. Ladies, you've given us lovers of erotic fiction a very kind treat, and just in time for Halloween too!

~James

Nice chapter, gotta love the insult that was dished out. XD Nice continuation of the story too inbetween the fucking, can't wait to see the next chapter. :)