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Leon/Mendez/Saddler. LOVE. Mendez/Luis/Leon. LOVE. I think I'm going to go off and cry of happiness now. Yeah. Those are two VERY beautiful pairings! And I just know you're going to do them justice.

well well i must say this was very interesting. very hard core too & perhaps this is the only ada and ashley around. good job

excellent job again Pandora and well detailed, descriptions and great action.
a very fun read. Keep it up ladies.

Nice chapter, lots of action and story advancement, which was awesome to read. This was a really long chapter, I can see a lot of work went into it. Well worth it in my opinion. ^_^

I get forgetting to comment on your stuff.
Is there going to be an Orgy?

Oh man, I LOVE your last line! Totally hilarious. XD

Mmm Leon was delicious in this chapter. It was great how you mentioned his playboy looks and then contrasted it with him kicking ass! And his plaga making him horny during inopportune times? Awesome! ^_^ Keep up the great work!

It had plenty of action. very well written and great descriptions as always

I really liked this last chapter. ^^ Shame there was no smut, but I'm sure when you do it some, it will be (as usual) awesome.

Please say there's going to be something happening with Saddler! ^^;

<3

I wasn't expecting an update so quickly. Not bad at all! so in depth. You make Leon a real man's man, and not a complete pansy. I really enjoy reading how you write him. Hell, I love the entire fic, as it stands. Both of you ladies are wonderful authors, and it shows that you really know your characters. Leon is tough and gritty, as he should be. Miss Graham is wickedly naughty, Krauser is his usual vicious and masculine self...I'm even starting to like the clone of Ada. Her reactions can be a bit over dramatic, but I can tell that is what you are going for. Even so, her reaction to her initial rape, and the subsequent violations, are actually very real. Having been in very similar situations before, and having met a great many other people who have, I can say personally, that all the comic effect you put in aside, if this were meant to be more serious, you would have a really chilling story. Perhaps the two of you should continue your partnership and do just that? ;) I'm definitely hooked!

Back to the chapter at hand: It's got me on the edge of my seat. I absolutely can't wait for the next installment!

~James

AHG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was yuri!!!! >[]< AHggggg!!!.......huhuhuhuhu.......
hmm....Ada better be seme OxO hehehe

ps. by the way, i wished they were men, hehehee (laughing evily)