rate_review Reviews

That was pretty nice. Nothing but sex and abuse right until the end. The whole knife rape was pretty wild.

Oooh, that was a seriously hot piece of work, you've managed to combine a complete rapist, a submissive slut and a horny dominatrix into one unrestrained threesome, all convincingly within a plot arc... Not bad at all 8).

Hehe, I hope I can do this justice, this is like the 20th chapter of fanfiction, adult or otherwise, I've reviewed tonight XD. The device of the plaga remains an original and clever idea, and in my humble opinion, beats mere humans managing to smell sexual arrousal on one another. The action itself was nice and smutty, although a little skimpier on details than usual in some places, but with so many positions to get through, I can understand you might not have wanted the chapter to draw out forever. I think there was a tiny mistake or two, but hehe, such things are inconsequential. All in all, it was entirely sexual and great at what it does 8).

I absolutely love how both you girls took from the game and made it into a story arc on the plaga sensitive to sound waves. Here, both you authors placed the direction of the game in where the plaga listens to certain noises and is commanded by that noise.

I think therefore that your usages of this was fairly intelligent taking from the game. I know that many writers write about the plaga from the game and use it to their own way of story telling, however, I find that this story despite all the smut and inbetween breaks, there is a common ground to make sense of it all.

Well done on all the smut scenes and I look forward to all the upcoming pairings to read.

Once again, you've provided the readers with an interesting concept: Ada (as a clone), Ashley (turning a bit evil), and Krauser (who seems to be growing more attached to Ashley) in a whirlwind of sexual bravado. The first half was entertaining and detailed, but after Ashley took over fucking Krauser, it seemed to slowly unravel. The details faltered a bit, and I was hoping for a bit more insight on Ada's part as she was violated with the knife hilt, which, I have to add, was a neat little twist that saved her bit in the threesome for me. I would have really liked a bit more interaction between the three, but perhaps you are waiting for the next chapter to reunite them? It would be ideal since I would be rather eager to see if you could bring anything new to the table as far as sexual activities.

Wow that was a long chapter of just all out fucking. I had to take off my jeans to give myself room. XD I think the next chapter should move the storyline on a little bit because that was quite a lot of sex action. :P Can't wait to see what you come up with next. :D

Daaayum, girl XD This was amusing and sexy, not to mention well-written :D I'm serious when I say you get better every time I read something new ^^ Now I didn't get that me-time I needed so... byyye XD

that was for chapter 1 btw.

I really like the use of metaphors and similes in your descriptions. Another good chapter, and well written.

Apologies about the minor delay, you know how it is, the ever flucuating eddies of occupation we struggle to surf XD.

One thing I've come to really enjoy in this series, is the shameless way in which parts are just, written to the point, sometimes with swearing for emphasis. It's a crude method if botched, but generally when I read things like a chorus of plagas singing "Lets get Leon's dick hard again!", well, it's too damn entertaining to be a screw up. That's what keeps this thing going I think, that reckless, out of control emotional roller coaster that spills between situation and thoughts and even the writing style, it's like the whole story is infected with the same struggle for sense among the chaos that the characters are. It's almost poetic, really.

Wow Chapter 7 was well detailed and I loved it. Keep up the good work Emily