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person Drowning
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! 'Tis a great chapter.

Hope you both get well soon ^_^
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was sweet how Ashley comes to Ada help....
person Jared
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well the last chapter with the threesome: kruaser/ashley/ada was well done, but a bit on the cliche side on dialogue. considering that reisdent evil is a cliche type game with cliche dialogue its good.

i hope one of you update so there is more to read. keeps up the good work.
person adawongfan
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What happened to ada and why is the clone acting so sad? At least she is getting laid >_<
are you going to write more?
person sam
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so uh when is the next update? *poke*
person two-bit
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm I didn't like the way Ashley was portrayed with Krauser in the threesome with fake Ada. She turned into a psycho sex villianess: maybe that is your plan here to write her that way? She exudes a dangerous childish attitude and maybe that was from the plaga. Great ideas to use the plaga coming off the game play.

I enjoyed the chapters with Leon and Ashley, but they are cut short. The descriptions were very nice and uplifting, and I had to skip the Ada getting raped by Salazar and Verdugos because that was really gross. I find it beleivable that Krauser did not rape Ashley in the next scene after Ashley changed her mind about him. I didn't enjoy the way Ashley is turning out, by the way she is childishly acting sex crazy. Was that from the plaga's influence? I understand that both authors share ideas, but are the way both you write it differnet in how you portray your characters evolution from the plaga?

Overall this was an easy read, which is great when you don't feel like trudging through a difficult writing after a hard day. Well done on that part. Bravo!
person anon
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i keep forgetting to review the other chapters. hehehehe, i like this leon: so manly. hehehe, and i like the ashley/leon bits like the others say: the krauser/ashley was just interesting all around. I can actually imagine ashley and krauser getting it on after krauser kidnapped her. Yeah he'd have a lust for the little president's chickadee.

i love the descriptions, gorgeously done. i like most of the stuff except i just do not care for the fake ada for some reason.
person Cheko
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eme-sama! That threesome was yum, even though I can't stand Krauser! You need to do another threesome, but with the two Adas and Wesker!
person Polaris
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot... I don't see how it's a parody but it's not a big deal as there's enough smut to be distacting. ;) I hate reading rape but the Ashley/Leon and Ashley/Krauser scenes are so very good. Love it. More Leon action, please. Hope you bring the real Ada in to kick some ass later.
person kiko_san
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the Leon/Ashley scenes best, then the Krauser/Ashley since they were consensual HOWEVER the smut scenes are so fun to read it doesn't matter. ^__^