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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
to edit what i said:that was for the long chapter but its better if it was a girl masturbating. :)
I missed you.
I missed you.
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, you finally updated! The part with the men in shadows was hilarious. The premise of their sexretaries is a very nice touch! Of course your scene of Leon, umm, relieveing himself was masterfully done! A+ for this chapter! ;)
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a long chapter! I loved the bit at the end. XD This is such a long chapter I don't even know where to begin saying stuff, I can say it was well worth the wait The game exerpt was a nice break too.
You've definitely not lost your touch. :D
You've definitely not lost your touch. :D
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
har har hilarious.
i am glad you both have not stopped writing. Get well you two ^^
The only problem is having to sign in to see this story. I mean giving age and verification to see the link and it is a pain in the bum.
i am glad you both have not stopped writing. Get well you two ^^
The only problem is having to sign in to see this story. I mean giving age and verification to see the link and it is a pain in the bum.
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg Eme you and your Krauser fetish all of a sudden. I likes teh chapter though. The world needs more incest =^^=
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incest!!!! The Bellas are hot. Why? Because they got junk in the trunk and chainsaws, bitches! Krasuer should have done them, or lured Leon over so they could fuck him almost to death. Keep writing please?!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yarr! Seems ye wenches have a hankering for Krauser. Scurvy mate is wanking all the cunts! Yarr...wankers! Avast we be wanting more!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eme...you're really messed up with your fan fics. I just want you to know that. Jesus loves you though, with all my heart, and I can't deny that the chapter was hot.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was dead and I'm glad its not. We need your fresh ideas instead of the same old stuff. Please keep writing.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since the two of you have updated, but seeing as how you explained why, its fine. Being sick so much is something bothersome and gets in the way of other activies. However, I don't think it tarnished this chapter at all.
Krauser and the Bella Sisters...Crimson, you're giving us some nice combinations of couplings all around! You are very good with threesomes, might I add. Although the sexual action was kept to a minimum, I thought it was fine. Truthfully, I, like Krauser, would have been thinking about two other women going after my goods.
I loved the detail about the Bella Sisters before the plaga overtake. I can see your description of them being very real. The added touch of the two crazed women with their last victim before Krauser was a nice touch as well.
Hopefully, you and your partner will recover and come back with even more entertaining chapters as this one.
Krauser and the Bella Sisters...Crimson, you're giving us some nice combinations of couplings all around! You are very good with threesomes, might I add. Although the sexual action was kept to a minimum, I thought it was fine. Truthfully, I, like Krauser, would have been thinking about two other women going after my goods.
I loved the detail about the Bella Sisters before the plaga overtake. I can see your description of them being very real. The added touch of the two crazed women with their last victim before Krauser was a nice touch as well.
Hopefully, you and your partner will recover and come back with even more entertaining chapters as this one.