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Wonderful chapter as always! I felt sorry for clone!Ada but the plagas singing to Leon was funny! XD Hope to read more from you sooooooon. =)

XD Mendez braids his beard! You guys are doing so well, but now I want to kill you for making a cliffhanger >> lol.

Can't wait for the yaoi!

Another very long chapter...and through the first portion, I found myself at a doze again. So detailed, almost unnecessarily so. This chapter honestly could have been cut up into two, or even three. The difference between yours and Crimson's writing is quite clear, but I think the two of you write well together. She makes the clone speak a bit more and nag while your clone thinks. I'd rather just hear her bitch and not get inside her head that much. It's like being caught in a sappy, highly cliched chick flick where you expect the naive female lead to grow up and stop dreaming about white knights, rainbows, and ponies, only, with the clone, she never does.

I don't think I can take too much more of the clone of Ada. Her whining and constant rambling is driving me mad. I wouldn't be tempted to rape her...rather, I'd rather stab her with a pitchfork. She's going to end up with plaga STD's.

Now onto Leon. I found this part to be highly entertaining. I've already spoke to Crimson about my feelings on the merchant. ^^ Hopefully she told you. Anyway, I was laughing and snickering through Leon's fiasco, even if it did tend to go on forever. I'm happy Luis made an appearance. I'll eagerly be awaiting some action for him in future chapters.

~James

^^ I actually liked the 2nd part best and this made me laugh the entire time.
It was really well written, well done, and you write awesome descriptions. Luis in the next chapter is going to be fun!

liked your story like always, and youre good use of spanish too!

Holy shit that was a long chapter, that could easily have been two seperate chapters. O_O

When is this clone going to stop being abused? :p Either way, this was a nice chapter for moving the story on, I think we can begin to see the end way off in the distance now in maybe another 70 chapters or so. xD

That was an evil cliffhanger to leave us at, hurry up and write the next chapter. :(

hehehe that was hilarious. I laughed at the second part and sorry, but I felt sorry for Ada clone. ;_;
Still very funny. Its so descriptive, so full of detailed stuff its fun.

~your friend, P. ^^

Wonderfully descriptive...deliciously decadent.

That was really cool to read. The krauser and bella sisters interaction was fun and nasty, however great job.

ah pandora pandora. I loved it. The deatails were enoirmous and detailed. Great fun too and easy to read.
I love details like this,however, I dont think I'll be around for the yaoi part. The beginning parts with the men in black deal was really enjoyable to read. Funny stuff.