rate_review Reviews

Quite different from the first chapter in terms of description, still a very interesting read though. :D The plot gets thicker it seems, and the smut keeps on coming. =D

It is very interesting that both you authors have your own style of writing and storyline and keep it together as a collaborative story.

I noted the differences too. The usage of dirty words is more in your face for one in the 2nd chapter, so I take it that's because of Krauser being the main 'rapist' idea?

The first chapter has, a classier feel, a more experience type of feel that I can't explain.

A reversal of roles, from mutual lust with a dominant female party, to rape with the male dominant, what a switch, hehe. I'll be honest on one point, although you had a decent explanation, the fake Ada angle felt a bit like it really only happened to facilitate giving a Ada Wong a submissiveness-inducing raping without breaking her character or perhaps, just without actually raping her. But hey, plot devices happen, it was hardly a glaring tacky affair, just a minor point, and this is mostly about sex anyway, not plot, is it not XD? Speaking of sex, I'm often left wondering if you make Krauser so huge because you like him, or you just think it suits him, I know he has a few fans at least and for the submissive types, well, everything else about him is large, hehe. I can't think of a lot to say on the actual writing, the content was opposite to the previous chapter but the style fairly similar, same use of juicy words like big, tight, wet, and same result, a hot, quality fic :D.

That was an incredibly smart move to make Fake Ada. Whose idea was that? That was incredibly smart.

Because it meant not breaking Ada's true character which is the kick ass Spy who doesn't take shit. Very good idea. The first chapter was so hot it was just incredible. I'm partial to Leon/Ashley.

Also, the unique style of the music and vibrations from the sounds are from the game isn't it? When Ada theorized that plagas and sound and the staffs of cultists can be connected.

Hot! :DD I like the way you threw some fighting and stuff in first before getting down to the good stuff, which of course was done with a high level of detail as usual. ;)

Awesome. :D

wow, amazingly hot. loved it.