rate_review Reviews

that was great ^^

very hot and lots of action. very very good.

Pretty interesting concept, and after reading the other reviews, I have to say I beg to differ with Maiafay.

Being a student of literature, I have read a great many novels with different points of view. I'm not sure how broad your tastes, but any good story does not focus solely on one particular POV. I took a brief glance at your own fanatical story, and YOU change POV from Leon to Ada to Wesker, back to Leon, and then to oc's.

Anyway...to the authors, kudos. Your story is good, and it shows that you are both talented and can respect one another's ideas and works.

Hehe, nice plot moving. Why did you have to leave it on a cliff hanger though? :P

Can't wait to see how she gets recovered, bring on the next chapter. :D

Firstly, I'd like to start off by saying POV switching is neither amateur nor sloppy. If done correctly and neatly, it's an interesting twist to a story and can give the reader a wider view of the action. The "interesting twist" part is opinion, the "wider view" part is not.

As long as a POV switch is clearly set up, it's perfectly OK and in no way means the author doesn't know what she's doing.

And just to nitpick, as some of us seem to enjoy doing, reviewers hardly have the right to complain about not liking a word used, especially if it's not exactly a dirty or offensive one. I'd flip out if she'd used the word "nigger", because that's horribly offensive to me, even though I'm not black. But commenting on a word that's commonly used and widely accepted is just silly.

I'm too tired to write a proper review...but nice story so far, and good action scenes.

Wow really amazing Eme I love the hardwork and detail that you but into these two chapters. I have faith that you will continue on Strong in the Chapters to come..Keep up the Great Work Girl.

I completely agree...MUCH better than eating chocolate. ;)
Loved the intermingling with the colors and music. Great effect. Also MOST sensual...

Very hot stuff. I loved the descriptions especially at the beginning with the colours and music themes, very nicely written.

Aaah, I wonder, is this a sequel to the Krauser/Ashley one I read recently, or is it just coincidence? Hehe, food for thought, but anyway. The music idea you had was, if nothing else, original, in truth you could justify a lot with the plagas infection, and this struck me as a sort of parody of a drug high, which of course are real so it does actually add up fairly believably, if you're going to accept everything in Resident Evil after all, hehe. That's important, Randomly Acquired Sex Superpowers (R.A.S.S... Made it myself :3) can be a bit of a vibe-killer, hurts the ability to take the story seriously, but you avoided that, nicely done 8). The descriptions had some excellent moments and were generally well put, the action elements did their part and hehe, oooh you had fun with the sex, plenty of greedy sucking and delicious cock and, better than chocolate, I had to grin at that. This was sexy, inventive and very easy to get into, easier than Ashley even, hehe XD.