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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
scary scene. i liked to see it from another pov
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
scary scene. i liked to see it from another pov
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Hell yes!
The way you described Leon almost made me want to rip into the man myself. ;) And I can't wait to see what Mendez has in store for him. I guess if he doesn't act soon he'll run out of Granados to send after people. =P Please continue this story ASAP!
The way you described Leon almost made me want to rip into the man myself. ;) And I can't wait to see what Mendez has in store for him. I guess if he doesn't act soon he'll run out of Granados to send after people. =P Please continue this story ASAP!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow someone got their panties in a bunch. Whats going on here? why is everyone flaming everyone around here O.O!??
I know you guys said no more defense posts, but I wish people would just calm down with the flaming.
I know you guys said no more defense posts, but I wish people would just calm down with the flaming.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
forgot to add that people need to stop flaming that 'anon' flamer. That was days ago if you look at the date. We dont know who the hell that anon flamer was and that 'anon' flamer was like what everyone says: Jealous and envious about this story and the authors. That's the only explanation I could give you guys because these people have nothing better to do than hurt you two authors.
They probably saw that you get reviews from your friends and got jealous because of that, and therefore they felt they need to be the ones to cause major damage on your story. Word of advise, ladies: Take the good criticisms, those who wanted to help your story and move on. I know you ladies moved on, but everyone else had not moved on. Good luck with your stories in the future. You both have really good talent and good writing skills.
They probably saw that you get reviews from your friends and got jealous because of that, and therefore they felt they need to be the ones to cause major damage on your story. Word of advise, ladies: Take the good criticisms, those who wanted to help your story and move on. I know you ladies moved on, but everyone else had not moved on. Good luck with your stories in the future. You both have really good talent and good writing skills.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-chant- THREE-SOME! THREE-SOME! THREE-SOME!
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mendez/Luis/Leon? You're a beautiful person. I hoped something would come up with Mendez/Luis and now it looks like it will ^^. Good job!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice short chapter there, moving the story on a bit. Bring on the next chapter! :D
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heya V and CrimsonBelladonna! I just wanted to say that I really ENJOY this story. I love how you guys work together, and the parody is written really well (I usually stay away from parodies because people don't write them well) and I hope you both update soon! And screw the flamers, V!!! I still love you! *hugs*
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always I am *loving* how you did your descriptions!
"Everything in this place made him insensitive. One had to be really. Good thing he was already hard core before venturing into this mission. Raccoon City and the six years training took care of that."
One of my favourite lines out of the chapter! You really make it sound so believable! Can't wait to read more! =D
"Everything in this place made him insensitive. One had to be really. Good thing he was already hard core before venturing into this mission. Raccoon City and the six years training took care of that."
One of my favourite lines out of the chapter! You really make it sound so believable! Can't wait to read more! =D