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Are you planning on updating soon? Not to be pushy, but I've really enjoyed reading this, and I'm still looking forward to the next chapter.

that was HOT

Lucky Leon, he owes Luis big time, man if he hadn't showed up, ouch XD. Hehe, mm I need to get my head in gear, it's all sleepy :o. OK, well it was good as always, Leon's part wasn't quite as quality as some of his previous bits, but it was still very good, just seemed a bit strange and detached, suddenly taking orders from that dude who has a name I can't remember, so I shall call him Sizzles XD. Anyway, Sizzles' part was kinda strange, but I don't know the game so maybe it makes sense if you're clued in. That aside, that was good, and clone Ada's was, what's a good word? It was a little unsettling but at the same time interesting, although the poor girl appears to be alive solely to suffer right now, perhaps it's just cus she's not the hardened agent her original is, but her actual purpose seems to have faded into obscurity, with only passing mention of her orders. All in all it's a good chapter though, I'm just not well-informed with Sizzles, plus I'm tired, so it was a little confusing XD.

I really enjoyed it actually. It was an erm, an interesting story to say the least XD

I haven't played the other games, but I'm familiar with Resident Evil 4 so this was a treat. I hope you continue. :)
Sorry I'm not a very good reviewer but it's good, really it is :)

Love the story. Keep on writing

Hahaaaa i love the way you started this off! With the rich descriptions of the colours....

one word: beautiful.

You see, what I love about your writing is that you have smooth transitions from one action to the next. That makes it easier for the reader to follow, instead of having to connect the dots/fill in the blanks. I know that when i'm writing something, I have the problem of going from one step to another too fast, but you totally know how to pace yourself!

You have the talent! I love your descriptions; they blow me away XD.

----A critical Critic.

The first section was disturbingly sensual. I think that's the way you planned it. The second had great action and some humor too. Enjoyable to say the least.

Nice shortish chapter there. Looks like he didn't really need those two women to help after all. :P I loved the description of how short Salazar is compared to Krauser. XD

Well, the first part is very detailed, but for some reason, it flowed beautifully. So it's a plus! Plus, the portrayal of Ada clone is very sad indeed. Whatever your intention, it came across great. Entertaining to say the least to the point of my strong annoyance at her. I was highly annoyed. This is a mark that you have done your job at portraying that pathetic clone.

The second part was fantastic. What can I say? It was entertaining to say the least and still enough flowy details to keep me reading.
Love it and hope you update soon! Can't wait to read what both of you have next.