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for Hygiene

by Nurexla

person Dragon Kirby
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely Axel-uke ness I must say. You win the internet xD
person Melien
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I liked it very much, humourous and well written. Keep on the good work! =D
person Eialune
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I was somewhat relieved to find out that this was not an enema fic. >.>; My first thoughts when you mix together "fetish" and "hygiene" and "water controller" are much, much dirtier (or should that be cleaner?) than tooth-brushing. So umm...

Yeah either way. XD Excellent story! I like the characterizations.
person senku
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just love the story it is ammusing and funny too oh and hot
person Six
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story, and my favourite pairing too <3 There's not enough good Axel/Demyx stuff out there, but this was great so I read it like 4 or 5 times hehe.

You should write a fic where Axel gets his own back like he threatened ^^ More manlove please.
person Six
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It cut my review off D=. I was saying that you should do a fic where Axel gets his own back like he threatened hehe. There's not enough Axel Demyx stuff out there
person Aerys Krystie
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, mein gott! I love it! This is one of my all time favorite pairings for KHII! I only wish there were more of them! Wonderful work! I really did enjoy reading this, and I hope you write more!

~*Peace*~

^^ Auska.
person hungrypankake
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking hilarious. Write more like that. Because I rofl'd like, a total of eight times. And I don't read man sex. I read yuri. You know that silly.
person FlurryxOfxFlames
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahah I love this story!! I love all your stories actually ^_^ Good stuff! I love AxelxDemyx <3
person Violet_Midnight
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Lordy, Laur, that was hot. XD I will never see that flavor of toothpaste the same way again.