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...this made me very happy >3

Good job!

Well, I certainly liked all the different pairings you put in and due to the length of this story i'd say you worked pretty hard. Wouldn't have thought it was your first time writing axel/roxas. I did think Demyx was a little out of character at times, and the emo boy comments (poor zexion!) were a little overdone, but by no means am I 'flaming'. Nice work, hope you write more soon.

I feel kinda stupid postin a 'review' on my own story...but i just wanted to say, if it seems like something is out of place in the story, i meant to do that^^ like the "emo boy" thing...tryin to put emphasis on the funny, but i might have overdone it a bit o_o so...sorry if it sucked>< and yesh, my first akuroku fic o.o and again, i hope you all enjoy^^ and thank you for your lovely reviews!^^

I LOVED this story! I can't believe that no one else has reviewed this. It was very well written.