rate_review Reviews

this is really good! although I'm usually not a fan of the darker stories. I really wanna know what happened to Mist to get him like that. am eagerly awaiting your next update:)

Your writing style is... highly addictive. I liked it! More Mist and sexy Riku!

Definitely different! I'd like to see how this goes...update!!

I would like to start of by saying that I'am a big fan of your work. I love the new style of writing and the new plotline. Im a little confused about the characters and how they connect to KH but I have alot of faith it will come out in the end. Please continue writing. The last thing I would like to do is congradulate you on how much your English has improve. Congradulation!

As is to be expected from an authoress of your calibre. Simply astounding. Great character development for only one chapter. Nice placement and use of expletives, not too loosely, not too censoring. Bellisimo.

I'm liking this so far! update soon okay?

yet another fantastic adventure you're offering us, BDP! I'm currently waiting for the epilogue for aches of the heart, but reading this in the meantime was a pleasant passtime! Keep writing, you're great!

Ooh, nice!

I like this, I like the vibe of this one! Dark, sexy and dangerous... Ouh I know it's not that hard to figure out who Mist is and quite frankly I like this personality of his, it's finally something else from the other character descriptions he's had so far in other stories. Poor Riku... but I know you'll make them work things out, right?
This is indeed different from your other works, but still as wonderful as they others.
I can't wait for the next chappie (sorry for my rambling) Keep it coming!