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for Your Dark God

by Chaosdreamer

person Apples123
schedule October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Best PH/James story I've ever read. I'm not sure how long it's been since you've updated, but I hope you continue this, but I hope you continue this story.I have to know how the demon baby turns out!
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you are alive!!!! i a soo glad you updated it has been forever!!! i love this new chapter and wish for more plz plz don't leave again!!!!*puppyeyes* i have cookies for you! but only if you update muahahhahaha
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your fic I loved. Kind of hard to understand, but I think I did. I like your AU version of Silent Hill. And ya, I know who Walter Sullivan is.

He is 10121. The red saint. Bastard son of god. The conjuror.
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shudders*

This story is still great no matter how many times I read it I still get chills whenever I get to the scene where Pyramid Head locks James in the coffin but it shows me how good your story is if you can get a reaction out of your readers then that is the mark of a truely great writer.
person Meg
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I was great! At times I actually felt sorry for James and hoped that he escape but then at other times you think it was in Hell and he had to live with it.
person ix-tab
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...
Seriously, I love everything about this, especially the merging scene. It was warped and beautiful to read.

I'm really enjoying everything you write.
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic stories. At least all of them for Silent Hill, I must confess that I haven't read others beyond that category. You have great skill, and it's shown in your ability to write about what usually needs pictures to be understood. Please continue writing more stories, they're excellent.
person ulla_nissinen@hotmail.com
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow?! This was really good, I have read it now two times and both times turned me into a waterfall.
A sequel would be great to see, but then again it is hard to write a good sequel if it´s not planned from the start...
But you got the talent! Keepém coming! ;)
person Lilalou
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I finally read your story entirely, and I really liked it. Some parts frightening, but some others oddly touching and moving : I think you kept the essential of Silent Hill's spirit, so who cares if it's an AU ?
Well, that's obvious that I loved the whole kitchen scene (OMG SO CLOSE AND WTF ARE THEY MERGING ?!! :P) and the escape attempt (O_o What is that gate doing here ? Not fair...). But I also liked the effort put into James' and Pyramid Head's thoughts / feelings / intentions, and how all that evolves along the story.
I also think that a sequel could be fun (even if i want to read the sequel of "Coming home" before ^_^), like "meeting with Alessa / Walter / other" or "going into one of the other world" or "Dad, I want to introduce you to PH my boyfriend." (Frank : o.0 !!) XD
There's just one thing which I think was unnecessary : the "XXXX's point of view". The lines of stars are enough to show there's a change. But you can say it in the beginning in your author's notes : "When there is a line, the point of view changes."
person Zuka
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is it really ture your going to continue this story. oh please do i really like this one to. but dont forget your new one either i like that one just as much as this one. but please do vontinue this one.^_^