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Ohyes, and is it possible for you to email me when you next update? I'm a bit lost on this site, and yet to find a sort of 'alerts' feature, if in fact there is one. Thankyooooooou.

PS: Smut is gooooooood. xDD

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I need more, please?
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Omg, this story is absolutely wonderful! This could actually be a whole other story for Kingdom Hearts. I really do hope you plan on continuing this, because this is too good a story to let sit and rot.

So good! i need smut tho O_o!!! i love storys with plot that are adult, too pften you find out of character stories with little to no plot. here you feel what the characters are feeling, without them going out of character. i'm wanting axel to be with vincent, even though if i read that pairing on the summary, i would never read the story! good work and keep going!

Yoh~
More Roxas...please? I will continue to stand by my opinion that this is the BEST Axel/Roxas fic I've ever read. Please continue..Oh. And for your enjoyment, please feel free to look up Anime USA 2006 on youtube and select the video entitled "Anime Cosplay." It has a picture of my Axel and my Axel and me in it (I'm cosplaying Roxas, even though my hair wasn't done.. It had yet to be cut, so I wore a black and white checkered beanie. >w<;;;). Please continue! Much love.

-ScribbleSama (BEANIE-ROXAS!)

You defiinently keep everyone in character! Even imagining Vinny as the "housewife" seems right, lol. Deealing with Reno and Axel, it's a good thing he took up that responsibility...or else everyone would starve! ^^

Ooo..I sense VincentxAxel coming....that would be hot. I love AxelxRoxas but Vincent and Axel should have a "romp". Mwahaha.

Love the story, can't wait for more!

haha, and once again, i love the whole reno/axel interaction... reno and rude? woah. must have missed that one, lol... OMG *squeal* i'm totally going to kidnap vince and marry him. then he can make lunch for me every single day too! ^^ haha, keep up the good work!

HOLYWOW!!! I'm so totally hooked. Ghaa!! How can you make something so non-smutty (so far XD) be SO COMPLETELY HOT?!?!? Those flashbacks consistantly gave me goosebumps. Gods I hope there'll be more of this soon. I need a 12 step program I'm so addicted.

In a bit of an explanation to my previous comment/review... whatever I'm supposed to call it, ^^;. I said dude because well I tend to call people that. If you're a girl and I offended you I apologize I didnt intend it. AGAIN! Good fic! I really do think you should try writing a SoraxRiku focused fic because you're a very talented writer. I'm a writer myself working on 2 fanfics but I don't have anywhere near the talent you have. The mark of a good writer is that you can paint a picture with the story you write and the reader can visualize it without very much difficulty and I have to say that you accomplished this beautifully and with flying colors! Keep up the amazing work and give my suggestion a try please? :3