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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I really can't wait long for more, I hope you have more written! I'm sorry you didn't get many responses but it doesn't mean no one likes it. Keep going please.
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story continues to go really well! yeahy~ Quistis was a nice addition, but I'm sad she didn't survive the cleansing. D: aww.
The two weeks thing? I'm going to say 'definitely not'. XD CoM takes place... maybe at the least a few days and the most a few months after the first game. Then the 2nd game is at least a year later (since Sora is 14 in the first game and 16 in the second). Just FYI. O:
You go! I get excited every time I see this story updated. ^^
The two weeks thing? I'm going to say 'definitely not'. XD CoM takes place... maybe at the least a few days and the most a few months after the first game. Then the 2nd game is at least a year later (since Sora is 14 in the first game and 16 in the second). Just FYI. O:
You go! I get excited every time I see this story updated. ^^
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you've done it again! I'm hooked, and on a fandom I generally don't read. A mysteriously corrupted Utopia, a reluctant savior, a dissatisfied nonentitiy, and! plausible explanations for it all.
I promise I'll leave a better review after coffe is obtained. It's too early in the afternoon for a third-shifter to be thinking in polysyllables. But needless to say, I'm addicted again.
I promise I'll leave a better review after coffe is obtained. It's too early in the afternoon for a third-shifter to be thinking in polysyllables. But needless to say, I'm addicted again.
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So much love for this story. Just so much love.
The story is very original and moving, the characters are accurate and likable, and the whole thing just flows perfectly :)
And just to throw in my opinion on the relationships - Love the Axel/Roxas and the Axel/Vincent hints. But what I REALLY like is the interaction Axel and Reno have, though that's because I'm a Reno whore and am therefore biased :D So even if you don't let them have even a little sex, maybe you could include more banter between them? You do it so well. *is trying so hard not to beg for Axel/Reno, as begging is demeaning*
So yes, really really great fanfic :D
The story is very original and moving, the characters are accurate and likable, and the whole thing just flows perfectly :)
And just to throw in my opinion on the relationships - Love the Axel/Roxas and the Axel/Vincent hints. But what I REALLY like is the interaction Axel and Reno have, though that's because I'm a Reno whore and am therefore biased :D So even if you don't let them have even a little sex, maybe you could include more banter between them? You do it so well. *is trying so hard not to beg for Axel/Reno, as begging is demeaning*
So yes, really really great fanfic :D
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bluhhhhh. I screwed up my email address and only just realised; there should be a '.au' on the end. xD Probably lucky I was surfing and discovered your fic during my journey.
Ignoring my general stupidity, I adored this chapter. Reading through it I didn't see any spelling/grammar mistakes, which is excellent considering your beta is so far behind. Vincent can sometimes be so mysterious that he gives me the chills, Reno is entertaining, and Axel always manages to dredge up emotion with his endless search for Rox. His thoughts before the flashback were awesome, also adding a new dimension to the cutscenes themselves.
Clearly I liked it, and of course you're still doing good. ^__^ Yay!
Ignoring my general stupidity, I adored this chapter. Reading through it I didn't see any spelling/grammar mistakes, which is excellent considering your beta is so far behind. Vincent can sometimes be so mysterious that he gives me the chills, Reno is entertaining, and Axel always manages to dredge up emotion with his endless search for Rox. His thoughts before the flashback were awesome, also adding a new dimension to the cutscenes themselves.
Clearly I liked it, and of course you're still doing good. ^__^ Yay!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...I started reading your fic a few days ago, and I'm already fond of it! I love the way you write, and your plot is really well developped, which is rare when you look at most of the fics! I'm looking forward to your next update! So could you send me an e-mail when you update, please? *chibi begging eyes*
P.S. : Sorry if my English isn't perfect, but I'm French, so... ^^
P.S. : Sorry if my English isn't perfect, but I'm French, so... ^^
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
squall x cloud! squall x cloud! lol, but noooo! cid forgot vincent! *sigh* and ryuuki and jin look interesting too! can't wait to find out their story. but, lol, i was thinking of jin from xenosaga- have you played that game? but samurai champloo is a great anime as well. I love your interludes ^^ it lets us see what the others are up too. anyway, happy new year, and add me to your mailing list please.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woo~ Such a good story for this site. Usually everything on here is a oneshot porn work. I want story with my mansex! not that theres any of that in here yet but you still have riku-sora snuggling, which is just as good. Your writing style is more then half decent, since its better then some profesional writing I've read (damn school books). You've kept me interested and now I will get down onto my fangirl knees and beg for more...and soon. Good fanfiction is so hard to come by these days...
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you intend to finish this. I would be so sad if you didn't. Can't wait for smut. I really am cheering for VincentxAxel now, but who would be seme? Hehe.
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hee! I'm so glad to hear that you never let a story rot. ^__^ I've really enjoyed this story! I started on it earlier today whilst browsing the KH section, and now I can't wait for a new chapter. It's probably lucky you updated today (well, technically yesterday, considering it's just past midnight now), or I'd never have found the fic. xDD
Anyway, it's very good. Characterisation is good, and I love the fact that this is almost Vincent-centric. It's hard to find stuff on Vincent that isn't... mutilated. And I'll just say that whatever direction the fic goes in, I'm likely to follow. =3 It takes a lot to squick me out.
Anyway, it's very good. Characterisation is good, and I love the fact that this is almost Vincent-centric. It's hard to find stuff on Vincent that isn't... mutilated. And I'll just say that whatever direction the fic goes in, I'm likely to follow. =3 It takes a lot to squick me out.