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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE! you MUST update this soon, or I'll die ;o;! I love Vincent and Axel! and this is too perfect! a great writer! got yourself a new fan, so please continue it <3
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been having trouble finding quality KH fanfics that use the same universe as the actual game. This fanfic has been a real treat to read, mainly because I absolutely love Axel and and thrilled to see version of "what happens next". Keep up the great work! Can't wait for more of it!
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOMENESS!!!me hearts it xD, though i just read chapter 3 xD
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me again! This was another awesome chapter. Want proof? You're converting me to Axel/Vincent >.< That's not something I would have considered before, that's for sure. But really, the whole thing is so good you could probably feed me Cloud/Red XII and I'd eat it up happily X3 Ok, maybe that's a bit of a stretch, but you get the idea!
Loved the inclusion of Quistis. I thought it was a nice touch that she didn't make it through the Cleansing. And I also thought Vincent's box of mementos was lovely and very sad. Hmm, what else did I paticulary like? Oh yes, the Axel/Roxas flashbacks. I love how you're taking the time to flesh out what they had. It makes me pine for them, it really does :( I hope for more of them!
Hmm, I'm thinking of fanart-ing Vincent in his apron, possibly threatening Axel with a spatula. Totally can't get the image out of my mind.
Update soon! *Encourages with gestures*
Loved the inclusion of Quistis. I thought it was a nice touch that she didn't make it through the Cleansing. And I also thought Vincent's box of mementos was lovely and very sad. Hmm, what else did I paticulary like? Oh yes, the Axel/Roxas flashbacks. I love how you're taking the time to flesh out what they had. It makes me pine for them, it really does :( I hope for more of them!
Hmm, I'm thinking of fanart-ing Vincent in his apron, possibly threatening Axel with a spatula. Totally can't get the image out of my mind.
Update soon! *Encourages with gestures*
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you still need a beta for this, I'm game. Can't say how good I'll be, but what the heck, I'll give it a shot.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vexen's eyes are actually green. Poor Quistis. I was actually hoping it was Larxene when you started to describe her, but then realized it couldn't have been. Are you going to include any more of Organization XIII? It was a great chapter. Hope to see more of Roxas next one though, ne? Oh! And I don't know if you've seen this yet, but this is the trailer to the Kingdom Hearts II: Final Mix and the PS2 Version of Chain of Memories: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgjpwqJ6TEU Enjoy!
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*O* *just drools for a while* This is really awesome. Vincent and Axel are two of my favorite characters, along with some other and seeing them together like this makes me happy. My inner-fangirl will squeal when a new chapter gets on from now on. ^__^ The Xemnas/Saix part made me happy too~... *drools some more* Now, only Zex and Dem need to really show up together and then I'll be one happy fangirl.
And poor Quistie. I hoped it was Selphie for a sec but Quistis works just as well ^.^
Your stories often make me think about... life, you know? XD; Sorry if that sounded random but they really do. It's fictions like these that make my days.
Oh and Vexens eyes are green, like poison. I just thought that you'd like to know.^^
Keep up the good work please!^^
And poor Quistie. I hoped it was Selphie for a sec but Quistis works just as well ^.^
Your stories often make me think about... life, you know? XD; Sorry if that sounded random but they really do. It's fictions like these that make my days.
Oh and Vexens eyes are green, like poison. I just thought that you'd like to know.^^
Keep up the good work please!^^
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lets have some VincentxAxel lovin! lol
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It has been so long since I have read a good piece of fanfic!!!!!! If I didn't know better, I would swear that Gaia's Grotto is actually real:D That's just how good your writing is!!! lol Anywho, I really like how you have set all the characters, plot and I especially love the little chapters where we get to see into the other characters' thinking process!!!! Keep up the awesome work, I shall eagerly be waiting for your next update...
Ciao for Now (^_~)
Ciao for Now (^_~)
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Probably one of the best KH stories I've read in a long while. Unlike most, the plot is engaging and is actually moving somewhere. Usually I'm way too lazy to review, or even keep up to date with fanfiction, but I've stayed up until 3:18am (which is huge for me) but this story deserves it. As an Axel fan, I'm particularly thrilled with the character development. OOC? Don't think so. Maybe it's the lack of sleep speaking, but given the situations he's in, I think Axel would respond in the same ways. And I love the thought of Vincent in an apron. Over all, I've been looking for good writing and found it (seriously, I would totally buy this as a novel. and not like, a 10 cent book from goodwill or a 3 dollar book from ebay. I'm talking full-price-15-dollars-band-new-in-the-stores novel.), so it goes without saying that I'm pretty psyched about it.