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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last review was short because I was in a hurry because I was gonna be late for school but now that I have time it will be longer. I just wanted to say that you are a wonderful writer and your story flows so smoothly, and you describe things and people very well, and stay in character. I get so excited when I see that you have updated, and I read the chapter right away. I can't wait for more smut, either, hehe.
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG they got out! Holy shit! i'm so happy! but im mad that they don't remember Vincent :( Update soon please! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy Dragon: ::Does not comment on the first scene of the chapter. Is too involved with doing a ‘Klingon Death Howl’ for Reno::
”On the man’s shoulder, perched a fairy, unlike any the firestarter had ever seen before, [...]”
Golden Dragon: My hikari wishes to know if you meant ‘fairy’. Ah, she’s still mourning for the fallen one, so I’ll be speaking for her.
Once again, Happy Dragon is very impressed with the level and depth of emotion that you are able to elicit from the readers. She appreciated the warning at the beginning about the middle section being a cross of reality, memories, and dreams. She will continue to look over that section for clues, though she thinks she’s puzzled some of it out.
She also liked how you played fair with Axel and Vincent suddenly appearing in the middle of town. It would have been tragic if they were mauled to death in the town square, but understandable. Subsequently, it also makes perfect sense that Squall/Leon would arrive on the scene quickly due to either patrolling or the new security system installed by Cid to alert the defenders to either Heartless or Nobodies.
Mmm, she likes the memory bit, and the subtle Xemnas/Saïx implications.
Ah, she wonders if Cid must work to remember Vincent. And if he does remember Vincent, she wonders if Cid will try to find some ‘alone time’ with his love. It would be interesting if Vincent would have to start a ‘whole new’ fight, just to recover Cid’s love for him.
Happy Dragon also wonders how the council in the Grotto will react to this, if they will send people after them. The entire world smacks of an experiment--a Hojo kind of experiment--and the council feel like the ringleaders. My hikari surmises that they would be infuriated if any of their subjects escaped.
But then she also thinks that it’s possible that Axel would attempt to go back to that world to rescue people later.
And lastly, a theory: the reason people disappeared in the past was because they were ones who remembered. The ones who remembered also kept their emotions. When their emotions peaked, when their raw potential was at it's height, the Grotto either rejected them to a different world, or destroyed them.
And, so many beasts came because they were drawn to Axel’s conviction. That, and it was a blatant setup by the council to ‘tie up loose ends’.
She liked the light exchange between the different FF characters at the end of the chapter. It amused her.
Now all Axel has to do is find a way to contact Sora. He knows the world, but Vince will kill him if he tries to use another dark portal. Admittedly the guardians of ‘Hollow Bastion/Radiant Garden’ do have a way of at least contacting King Mickey, from my hikari's understanding. And Mickey does have a way of contacting the children . . .
Mmm, truly this was a heart wrenching chapter. Sadly, given the title--and the summery on MM.Org . . . Happy Dragon knew what was coming, and was saddened by it. Understanding, but saddened. And yet, because she knew it was coming, it was just a tiny bit easier to swallow.
Ah . . . she’ll end it here. But Happy Dragon will continue to follow this haunting, wickedly brilliant tale.
She bows to you.
And you have my graduate for writing this . . . fiction.
PS: My hikari is overjoyed that this story is only halfway done. But she still hopes for a sequel.
”On the man’s shoulder, perched a fairy, unlike any the firestarter had ever seen before, [...]”
Golden Dragon: My hikari wishes to know if you meant ‘fairy’. Ah, she’s still mourning for the fallen one, so I’ll be speaking for her.
Once again, Happy Dragon is very impressed with the level and depth of emotion that you are able to elicit from the readers. She appreciated the warning at the beginning about the middle section being a cross of reality, memories, and dreams. She will continue to look over that section for clues, though she thinks she’s puzzled some of it out.
She also liked how you played fair with Axel and Vincent suddenly appearing in the middle of town. It would have been tragic if they were mauled to death in the town square, but understandable. Subsequently, it also makes perfect sense that Squall/Leon would arrive on the scene quickly due to either patrolling or the new security system installed by Cid to alert the defenders to either Heartless or Nobodies.
Mmm, she likes the memory bit, and the subtle Xemnas/Saïx implications.
Ah, she wonders if Cid must work to remember Vincent. And if he does remember Vincent, she wonders if Cid will try to find some ‘alone time’ with his love. It would be interesting if Vincent would have to start a ‘whole new’ fight, just to recover Cid’s love for him.
Happy Dragon also wonders how the council in the Grotto will react to this, if they will send people after them. The entire world smacks of an experiment--a Hojo kind of experiment--and the council feel like the ringleaders. My hikari surmises that they would be infuriated if any of their subjects escaped.
But then she also thinks that it’s possible that Axel would attempt to go back to that world to rescue people later.
And lastly, a theory: the reason people disappeared in the past was because they were ones who remembered. The ones who remembered also kept their emotions. When their emotions peaked, when their raw potential was at it's height, the Grotto either rejected them to a different world, or destroyed them.
And, so many beasts came because they were drawn to Axel’s conviction. That, and it was a blatant setup by the council to ‘tie up loose ends’.
She liked the light exchange between the different FF characters at the end of the chapter. It amused her.
Now all Axel has to do is find a way to contact Sora. He knows the world, but Vince will kill him if he tries to use another dark portal. Admittedly the guardians of ‘Hollow Bastion/Radiant Garden’ do have a way of at least contacting King Mickey, from my hikari's understanding. And Mickey does have a way of contacting the children . . .
Mmm, truly this was a heart wrenching chapter. Sadly, given the title--and the summery on MM.Org . . . Happy Dragon knew what was coming, and was saddened by it. Understanding, but saddened. And yet, because she knew it was coming, it was just a tiny bit easier to swallow.
Ah . . . she’ll end it here. But Happy Dragon will continue to follow this haunting, wickedly brilliant tale.
She bows to you.
And you have my graduate for writing this . . . fiction.
PS: My hikari is overjoyed that this story is only halfway done. But she still hopes for a sequel.
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeay! another update! *dances* poor reno!!! ;-; it almost made me cry! but they're free...oh no more akuvincent mushiness, right? T-T...but vinxcid is one of my favs! so yeay! Im looking forward to it :3
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh you're killing me here!
I just read that whole fic, and now i'm going to go cry in a corner cause I WANNA READ MORE!
God, even another interlude....
This is an impressive fic. 10/10
I just read that whole fic, and now i'm going to go cry in a corner cause I WANNA READ MORE!
God, even another interlude....
This is an impressive fic. 10/10
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot!! I think I've fallen in love with your story *_* (it's been a while since I had read a good story after I've read change my stripe) and I love the axelXVincent couples x3 had to draw a bit of them from some scene in your story xD
oh I wanted to know if i could be on alert with your fic and I would draw you piccies! (got two already that I wanna finish! x3)
it's a plus, so continue the great work!
oh I wanted to know if i could be on alert with your fic and I would draw you piccies! (got two already that I wanna finish! x3)
it's a plus, so continue the great work!
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
forgot to tell you my gal x3 it's www.shadow-kuronue.deviantart.com
there is already two fanart posted, so hope you'll like them thought they are just sketches ^^''' I will finish them when got more time. (that means before going to sleep)
there is already two fanart posted, so hope you'll like them thought they are just sketches ^^''' I will finish them when got more time. (that means before going to sleep)
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awn. ;___; this fanfic is already my favorite kh's one~! I saw it many times on the first page of updated fanfics, but there were so many chapters that kinda desmotivated me. XD but for some mysterious reason, I've started to read. the best thing I've made ever. ;_; I loved how you charactered Axel, man, really loved. So as Vincent. s2 And your story is very original, man. XD Loved it, really, really. *made a comment about that with almost all my friends* Haven't submitted a review because I started when you uploaded this chapter, but now I'll always review. *_*
I loved the lemon scenes. I just freaked out completely when I read that Vincent kissed Axel. 8D I was kinda hoping for these scenes between them, even dreamt about it *fangirl*. XDDDDDD And now I'm crazy for next chapter! ;__; Hope that Axel and Reno can win this fight. ._. And be alright. ;3;
ok, just one more thing: ok, english is not my original language but... ;_; omg, your writting skills are awesome! *loved it* X3
I loved the lemon scenes. I just freaked out completely when I read that Vincent kissed Axel. 8D I was kinda hoping for these scenes between them, even dreamt about it *fangirl*. XDDDDDD And now I'm crazy for next chapter! ;__; Hope that Axel and Reno can win this fight. ._. And be alright. ;3;
ok, just one more thing: ok, english is not my original language but... ;_; omg, your writting skills are awesome! *loved it* X3
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! we finally got to the action! nice build up of tension and angst! i can;t wait to see what happens next, and if there are any more steamy scenes planned. =)
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! Yaoi! I loved it, it was really well written and absolutely hot! Can't wait for more!