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for Desperate Reflections

by Crya2Evans

person InuHanyou1701
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude! You're an AMAZING writer! I'm very impressed by this fic. And I have to say, you oughta do some SoraxRiku fics because you make the relationship between them very believeable. Keep up the good work!
person YC
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it as always! Vinny needs to open up, heh heh.
person Ashley
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I loved this chapter too. ^_^
person BoroBoro
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Vincent and Axel are hilarious together! anyway, i really liked what you did with the flashback of Lea's memory ^^ gah! and the whole vincent/cid ordeal is killing me!!! lol, funny, i'm more worried for vincent than i am for axel!
person Ashley
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are such an amazing writer! I can't wait for more!
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! Of course your writing is addicting. It's wonderful. I'm absolutely hooked on this fic. It's written beautifully.

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person YC
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! It's funny how alike Reno and Axel are. I've always thought that, heheh.
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of course your writing is addicting. <3

Even if the fic is Axel-centric, I hope there will be more mention of Roxas. Axel wants to get out of Gaia's Grotto to regain his memories and thus find Roxas, ne?

And I'm curious to see how you'll bring Roxas to be his own physical entity.. That'll be fun to toy around with, huh?

Update soon! And hey, if you need a beta-on-the-run, I'll be glad to do that for you. Editting is like second-nature to me. It _is_ second nature to me.

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person BoroBoro
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah! i got so caught up in the story that the ending of this chapter took me by surprise! anyway, very good so far ^^ i'm glad that reno is in here as well- someone else to keep vincent company! :) keep up the good work, loved how you crossed axel's memories with the organization members. oh, and did vincent and reno know each other before they met on gaia's grotto (like when they were still alive?)
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really impressed with how you're putting this fic together. I really love it. One of my favorites, I think. Please continue, you're writing is addicting! <3

--ScribbleSama